Very good very good loved it

K I am happy u r updating again, cant wait for it on a03

Um, I would love to see the updates but are you using the same name? I am not finding you on AO3? Please a clue, a clue. :D very eager to see more transformer fic.

Well written. I like the dialogue you used.

The tension over Sam's death in first few chapters was wrenching. You described the character's reactions vividly. Again, well done!

So I melted. Everywhere. And laughed. And squealed. And hid my face in the pillow a million times. And could barely take this chapter.

Man. Wow. This fic was awesome. A million A's to you! I don't even know what else to say. So overwhelmed right now. I may cry. :'D *really needs to go to bed

well. Tootles for now. Thanks for such a lovely story. :3

Okay, so this chapter was absolutely awesome. There was psychological angst and romantic angst and sexual tension angst and fluffy angst and oh my gosh everything. SjsmMjabzjzK haha, I liked this chapter far too much. And when jazz came in with barricade and barricade explained what happened... Xjsksksjbfksns I had to put my phone down (reading on there) and wail in my pillow (laying in bed, supposed to be sleeping) and then the fucking end!

you killed me. :'D

so sweet and sad but loved it, great story!

I am amazed at how quickly the story shifts from one scene to the next, and then there's the load of stuff I need to read between the lines. Fast-paced though it is, this story was fun to read. I enjoyed how Sam and the AS were integrated into the story, as well as some of the key characters from the second movie. Thanks for writing this!

Rarely do i enjoy a story this much. I love where you took the characters throughout and the ending was pretty satisfying. I would look forward to developments in the story (megatron LOL). The only critique i have is to read over the chapters carefully before posting because grammatical errors are frequent. I wasnt bothered at all by them but im sure they confused some people

dun dun dun

lol

yeah!

cool.

wicked.

I think I might have. Cried somewhere in this chapter. Loved it none the less. :)