God...this right here is a MASTERPIECE . Like it's amazing how u described every character in detail and how in character they are . It brings joy to my heartless soul to read a well written fanfic such as this . Not bad

Wow, this was great! I mean it, I loved every bit of it!
Did you post a sequel? :D :D

I really liked this. The subtlety was very effective, even me -the full on yaoi fangirl- got pulled in.

So very well done :)

To start my review, it was amazing!

I loved how you describe every detail carefully and how you use

imagery too! I was so happy I found something that made me feel

like this. It was exciting to read how you portray the tension between Aerrow and the Dark Ace. I just could not stop reading it to the end. I am so pleased to read it! Thank you for writing this. I m so glad to see it. He he

Anyways I hope you keep writing about Dark Ace and Aerrow. Well because I love this pairing! Good job!

Hun, i loved every bit of this story, characters are in character, the personalities fit the time frame. AND MOST OF ALL IT'S A FREAKING CUTE PAIRING. well actually the most of all is that you included the other characters with in character-ness too and it's such a sweet story. No mistakes as i read, well written and such n such!

if you worte the prequal and sequal i (well i wouldn't worship you) BUT I'D LOVE YOU! (not that crazy psycho stalker kind of love but that kind of fan adoring-thing...) YAY!

Great! I'd love you to post more stories about this! It's so hard to find good SH-fics, and you're a very telented writer! Please post those prequels/sequels!

-Jupiter

Bloody fantastic!

please do tell the answer to the question for Aerrow and Rook

sequel please

Yes! You must must MUST make a sequel! About Dark Ace and Aerrow's love relationship! It's so sweet! I love their relationship! I will be looking out for it x

A very well written story. I love how you kept them in character, If you wrote a sequel, that would be pretty amazing, especially if the characters are well kept and IC.

Youre a really good writer. You should definately write more. After reading all of this you should write another Fan Fiction about the relationship between Aerrow and The Dark Ace (Rook). They should sneak of to see each other and when the Storm Hawks find them out they have to flee to avoid being thrown in the Atmosian prison for betrayal. That is just a story i thought of. I may even do it but with a different beginning (Obviously) but whatever you choose know this, i will be behind you 100% of the way. Good Luck, your my favourite Author, this story is my favourite piece of Fan Fiction, i will never forget it. I will be looking out for more of your work x

I think you have a great talent for writing Storm Hawks Fan Fiction. You should definately write a sequel about Aerrow and Dark Ace whether they become best friends or lovers! I absolutely loved your story it is the best one i have read so far. (I have read quite a lot!) You should write more Storm Hawks Fan Fiction. I will be waiting for your new story's x

I'm so sad this is done. You need to write the sequel, at the very LEAST. It's just getting good between Aerrow and Rook. ;) But, knowing what happened between Piper and Cyclonis is so tempting too! Please write them! Please!

It would be great if you decided to write a prequel and a sequel, since my only complain about this ff is that it leaves almost everything without an answer [plus I must admit, Im a total sucker for multi-chaptered stories]. Still, I loved it, like I said before. Oh, and your choice with the lyrics was perfect.

And Im actually in the middle of doing a fanart for the last chapter ~~

A lot of things were nicely subtle about this story; mainly the relationship between Ace and Aerrow. I also didn't mind the length of it, I like short stories as much as I like oneshots (which is a lot). But honestly, don't be surprised that peeps liked this story; it was well thought out and intriguing, and the sparseness of your writing style made it really easy to understand as well as enjoy.

That was a nice read.