Nicely done

Dude, I did not even know this one had Cloud in it! XD I just figured it out when I reread Inclusive and reread your AN. Apparently I skimmed much too fast over the part about it being the prequel to this. And while I like Zack and Sephiroth on their own, it's not as lovable without Cloud. It feels like precious, little Spike is being left out! That's just me, of course!

Anyway, onto an actual review here! I really love the banter you come up with between Zack and Sephiroth. I swear, it makes me swoon. And Sephiroth is a good actor, pretending like he doesn't even know Cloud all that well, damn! Of course that ending scene in the bedroom totally made up for that! I'm gonna have to go reread it! Lol.

Omg Zack is sooo freaking adoravle along with Cloud omfg x3

:D holy hell you write Zack beautifully! Him and Cloud together is glorious but with Sephy involved as well it's fantastic :) looking forward to more of your work

More more pretty please! Any way reno can show up more evil smirk hehe

Well. I love this series. I figured it would be easier just to comment on this about the series than to leave a comment on each and every one. So. Best way to say this is that I absolutely loved this series, and that you have done a very good job with all of these, and that this threesome should get more attetion than it does. Anyways, again, awesome job!

Oh for heaven's sake, lol... My brain misfired. When I read "in chronological order" on the Decorum series in your profile, for some reason I Started here. I read, in Reverse order, all the way to Cloud's 16th before realizing. Oh well, still fun & now I can start the series right this time :)

Nice.

I loved the entire Decorum series. So much to love-Zack's smooth first meeting with General Sephiroth, poor Zack's disastrous first relationship, the Genesis/Angeal backstory, sobbing embarrassingly during Angeal's funeral, and, of course, Cloud stalking. I did find the format of having each section being a separate story a bit hard to follow, especially since the stories weren't published in chronological order. Still totally worth it, but a little confusing.

I so love this serie! I don't know if you think about that or not but why not put a number in the summary of the Decorum srie ? I hope that you won't be mad for saying that.

So cute! It's funny to think how long ago this was written! It's the first one... *thinks about all of the Decorum installments that were to follow* This is such a great oneshot. It's funny & adorable. Each one of the characters fits perfectly with the others. :) Zack especially is made of win. :) It makes me think back... the last time I read this, it was out loud to my latest ex-best friend. I remember getting to the bedroom scene & CHOKING because my mom was suddenly in the next room.

I just love this series. Can we see more with Cloud?

Lol-Zack's report on Kalm. _ It'd be awesome if homework was that easy.

I did it! I finished the Decorum arc! Oh no, I finished the Decorum arc...*feels a sense of bittersweet loss and gain at this fact*

I can't believe this was pretty much your first story. This is clipped, polished, precise, and you have characterization down flat. I love Sephiroth in here, he's everyone's favorite stoic guy with a soft spot for Zack. _ The humor in here with the underwear is hilarious, however you came up with that joke is beyond me, but however you did it, it was a night of history in the making. :)

I can't believe this...you have me liking threesomes now, because of this arc. Thank you for your words, your talent, and the speed of your fingertips. Soon, I'll look up Silence of the Chocobos, and make my way, albeit gingerly and with a box of kleenex through TMOA and Not Wrath of Gods.

~Luna

Omgosh, i loved this series. Are there going to be more?

Haha-I loved this. :) It was sweet.

This was the most funny chapter... hahaha everyone learned already that when it comes to Zack and his Spiky... you just need to move away :D