Beautiful

I didn't realise how fond I was of this story until I had the yen to come back and read it again, and realised how strongly it (and its partner) had stayed with me, and for how long.

It's a beautiful idea, hung together perfectly (and most appropriately non-linearly), because after all, it really would hardly be fair for a Time Lord not to get the chance to meet his love in any particular incarnation just because he happened to be on a part of his timeline which wasn't originally going to have been the one to align with hers (or something like that :-).

I do like the way that their paths cross though time, where each Doctor can always see just enough of Rose to fascinate him, each time in a different way, as Rose changes along the slow path and he changes down the long one, making a pattern that's not nearly as simple as a circle.

Thanks for the read – lovely job.

I know you have wandered out of the fandom by now but I love your stories...This one make me so sad.

You like to mention the Doctor's physical strength in your fics, so I was wondering if you'd do a fic where Rose first notices that he's stronger than the average bloke? I sure you lovley mind could expand upon the idea easily. XD

This and its companion set are among the very best stories I've ever read - I completely enjoyed this. I hope that one day you will write 11

Great story

Good lord! I will never look at 6 and those ridiculous outfits the same, ever again! Great dual story. I enjoyed switching back and forth between them. Thanks! :-)

Your writting is possibly the best thing that has ever happened to me in my SHORT 19 years of exsistence.

Rose and the Doctor. Not the big eared Doctor, not the pinstripes, just 'The Doctor'. It doesn't matter what he looks like. She loves him no matter what. Thank you for writing!

Reading these two pieces was both startling and beautiful. Thank you for sharing your insight, passion, and imagination with us. I was truly moved.

I just started this and I'm already balling my eyes out! 10 just breaks my heart and so does baby Rose. I was taken aback about the Donna part until I realized this was written after Doomsday and not Journey's End.
I also have a feeling these stories are going to make me want to watch old Who (I am pretty new to all of this but totally addicted to the new series after watching the first 4 seasons plus specials). I love all of your stuff that I have read so far. I hope you are able to come back and start writing more soon. I wish you were a writer for the show!

/This is so heartbreaking. It creeped up on me as well(the tears). I've read this companion story in time with When You're Older, switching back and forth. May I say that you are an absolutely wonderful writer? I honestly didn't think I could fall in love with a story!

That was beautiful and very sad.

Can't tell you how much I loved this story and its counterpart, they are amazing! I loaded them up on my ereader for a family reunion and it was a life saver! Such an interesting and unique story!

I only have 14 words for you (irony, like Carrionite): That was the singularily most beautiful-beautifully written story I have ever read.