| Reviews for Shadow of Nothing |
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   EllaJuroku chapter 2 . 11/22/2017 She hit him in the nuts! Really? Why? |
| Diving in chapter 6 . 3/28/2017 Why don't they get her out of here? Like bring her to town, or a hotel? |
| Writing Pixie chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 Normally when a story is done I wait until the end to review it. But I have to say this is making me giggle immensely and do happy little fan girl dances in my seat. (continuing to read as we speak) |
| TheCurat0r chapter 3 . 7/7/2014 She must've been marked up in some way... |
| TheCurat0r chapter 2 . 7/7/2014 Another good chapter. You did a good job of showing Naru being caring while maintaining his cold and logical persona. |
| TheCurat0r chapter 1 . 7/7/2014 Good chapter. Poor Mai... |
| RosetheWolfgirl chapter 2 . 3/15/2014 XD Mai hit Naru in the crotch! yes... |
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/9/2013 very nice i truly enjoyed the entire story well done. |
| xxpockystrawxx chapter 12 . 8/5/2013 EEEEEEEEEEEEEE! -fangirling- |
| anuja chapter 6 . 7/29/2013 this is not right at , the first thing naru would have done was to make a protective charm for mai, clense the room and put barriers around her. and there would certainly have been some talk of taking mai out of the case. |
| Kagome Pureheart chapter 2 . 7/3/2013 I'm laughing as I imagine Mai hitting the baby makers again by accident and Naru going like...and there goes kid number 23 now. |
| Racnea chapter 17 . 3/11/2013 Awesome! |
| minamishiho chapter 17 . 3/9/2013 about this one, hmm... when i read about mai's nakedness, my mind screams: exhibitionist! and then i read the case, feel like the story in f*kku (i used to be a hentai reader too, but i read f*kku). maybe because of that i'm not really surprised when it revealed than a hentai doujinka is the culprit (knowing or not). this is great as usual, so great that made me sick when reading the rape scene (it's a compliment you know, i mean your story is realistic). thanks to made some wonderful stories like this! and thanks for your pm about my review in dawn series! i'll definitely waiting your next stories! |
| ministop chapter 17 . 2/18/2013 It's good. I mean despite the OoC-iness of the character of Naru, it's good. Or maybe, it couldn't be OoC-iness, since we aren't used to seeing Naru in this kind of light. Well, in my opinion, I mean. I had somewhat imagined Naru as sweet or really caring regarding Mai but his arrogance/narcissism covers his gentle side. Anyway, I had fun reading this fiction, since I really was feeling giddy up until the end. I even squealed when reading the romantic chapters |
| zero chapter 1 . 2/17/2013 waaaaaaaaaah, I'm squealing like a pig here because of giddiness... |
