Reviews for Not So Inviting
Meiza chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
This. Is. Genius. I was cracking up the whole way through!
Chimebelle chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Sweet!
And it was so cute too!
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
His letters (and his predicament) cracked me up. And Sebastian gets a raise for sending them!

I love it, I really do. Very funny...oh. I just said your username on accident. iloveit.

Ha, that's neat.
honeydew7 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Love it! :)
ijustwanttodeletethisplx chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Good job, it was very funny! I can't belive Sebastian would randomly mail 15 letters just lying around on the floor to the same address! Haha. But I like it and it was cute :)
silent romantic chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
:) good job :)
RaeValens chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
For once I can't think of much to say. This was fantastic, you had me laughing through the whole thing, lol
crystalwolfberri chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
:D that was just too funny! XD

hilarious yet adorable written all over this fic. I love it so much!

personally, I think the fifth letter was the most believeable and the best. "there's a fabric shortage in town" xD

hilarious and too cute and beautiful. love it!
murky burning chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Oh wow, I LOL'd SO much during this story!

But I think the best reaction I got from this story was the dorky smile of relief that crept onto my face when I read the last couple of lines. Yaay for Zelos! D
silt chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
LMAO! hella funny! thanks for posting.
Anna P.T chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
I LOVE YOU. X3

This made me laugh SO hard
SilverChelle chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
That was so funny! Keep writing:)
Role-Playing-Geek chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
"Sory if thar R speling miss taks. U no Im nott 2 gud at skewl."

Hah, that line made me laugh so hard-that has to be my favourite one.
MindTricks chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
I love this fic! It's great. Very nice Zelos character, and those letters really made me laugh. I like the one from Lloyd, that was genius. :) And the one from the King too. Congratulations on such a fantastic story!
Sundiz-Star chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
How adorable :)

A funny, interesting concept that had me giggling all the way through. Good job!
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