Overall, this was a pretty good story. Just had a few things that didn’t make sense. First, I don’t think Hayley would have abandoned Hotch after he was injured. She was not that shallow, selfish or uncaring. Second, the whole event with Hotch falling off the gurney made no sense unless he was outright delirious. What did he hope to accomplish? Third, the whole touchy feely thing between Hotch and Reid was weird and uncomfortable. It’s like they were clingy and cuddly with each other, rather than showing care and concern in ways that are normal for grown men. Despite those issues, I enjoyed reading the story.

So depressing. So sweet great job writer

Grsat story

What a hopeful ending after such painful and traumatic events. You wrote all the characters so wonderfully; their reactions and demeanor were all spot on. Poor Reid...and Hotch. I'm glad they have each other amd the team for support.

Ending was too cute.

You gave me a scare when they said Reid was dead. Thought I was gonna have to hunt you down. Ha.

Oh, you're killing me, poor Reid.

Great story and about my two favorite guys too.

Yeah! Perfect! I'm so glad you didn't kill him.

Gotta love Reidisms!

Wow. Yes. Love it.

I did read the first version, just didn't get to review before now. This is definitely better, and not just because Spence isn't dead at the end. It fits with the story so well.

I hope they're ok. Off to the next chapter.

Well done. And my gorgeous man is able to see again and all seems right in the world. I'd be very happy if you left it there, or do you feel you still have to resolve things?

YAY! I had a feeling that's where you were going when you had Hotch get knocked out, but you did it perfectly.

I can tell there's not much left, but I'm looking forward to it!

Lovin' it,

Kas

feels like an ending at te same time it doesnt, i think reid seems to have recoveered from his bit of a depression a bit too fast... i think he should still have major feelings of self doubt...

love it anyway, so let me know if you are going to keep going, cause im not sure if this is the end... dont think it is and yet that nagging little voice...

heres an idea for ur next one:

JJ is really sick, Morgan is really sick, Reid is really sick?

Why are they sick? And What is prentiss rossi(or gideon) hotch going to do?

Hostpital?

UPDATE! Reid will be in so much pain later,I hope you update soon, happy writing.

XD