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good story, bad grammar and spelling.
very, *very* bad!

Thank you for sharing this story with us.

Normally, I'd agree with your stance on corporal punishment, because I was given corporal punishment while growing up, and it wasn't that bad. H0WEVER, in this case, you have to keep in mind that Harry had been VIOLENTLY abused by his "relatives" (for lack of a better word), for ALL of his formative years, and so corporal punishment, in this case, would do more harm than good. Just saying.

I loved the line about not wanting to kill Ron as Molly would want to do that herself. I am dismayed at your misuse of its and it's.

Hiya, just wanted to point out that you put miss chug insyead of miss Chang... Thought youd wanna know so you can sort it...
Just trying to help

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Legilimense... No letter u in it

You know... TECHNICALLY this is up as CHAPTER 3

And another man goes to prison without a trial

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I like this story it saves harry from some of the horrors he had in the books I can't wait for the next chapter

I don't get it. If you weren't going to allow his Guardian by rights to take Harry why make it where Siri is free. Harry belongs with Sirius and Remus.

Love it!
Can't wait for more!

I see it as Harry giving back to Malfoy for insulting his surrogate mother. Malfoy is nothing but a spoiled brat through out the whole story.

Where was Ginny in all this?

woooo! loving it so far, and i will be watching for the next chapter. always love when Harry has a chance to actually learn and fight.