It was excellent. You should write more pokemon stories. Greetings from Argentina.

This is the best Pokemon fic I've ever read! The adventure was so thrilling and I love that each of the trio helped beat Lucinda. Actually a lot of them helped. Lucinda is still a mystery to me and the backstory was a bit 'meh' for me. But I loved everyone in this fic, especially the gym leaders together.

And ugh at Gary ruining the moment lol.

This guy has the same name like Prof Oak.

Thank you so much for this fic! This is one of the best I've ever read! I got so sucked in and stayed up late into the night to finish! I hope to see more like this from you in the future (like maybe that sequel you mentioned!)

Oh my god Thanks for this story it was so perfect and sweet ... Just hope to see more aaml from you. Thanks again.

Still one of the best fanfictions I have ever read.

To this day, this remains one of my favorite pokemon fanfictions of all time. It holds up to time and proves to be even more enjoyable than I remembered it being.

I LOVED how despicable Lucinda is. Killing another for Sabrina's failure, absolutely brilliant and cruel. It's the kind of ruthless manipulation I love from excellent villains.

The characters are spot on. And although I can't quite see Ash as 16 in this story, I definitely can see Ash and Misty in this adventure. All of the characters in fact. It plays out like a movie when I read. And I can't stop reading.

I think the main problem with imagining Ash as 16 is that these events are right after Pokemon 2000, so I think that's what's making it hard for me to see Ash as older. But whatever the case, it doesn't make this story any less enjoyable. Wonderfully crafted. Beautifully written. I'm off to finish. I just had to gush about how much I loved this chapter.

This was an incredible story! Great plotting and I loved the romance between ash and misty 3 also, team rocket showing up at the tower? BEST TWIST EVER! Your characterization was spot on and you made me stay up until 3am reading this all day. Thank you for all of the effort and time you put into writing and finishing this:) it was so so worth it!

I'm quite impressed with you! You did quite a good job on the story, and I'm glad you waited till there end to add the whole romance thing in! Encore! *clapclapclap* on and also is funny how you named Lucinda Lucinda, considering it means dawn, but you meant that, didn't you!

If this already isn't in this series, I think it would be awesome to see Lucinda vs Mew and Mewtwo

Wow! This story is worthy to be a film. Really, it was sooo good that once while I was reading you story late in night, I thought it was one of the films of Pokemon. It can be only a story, but I will always remember you story as one of the movies of Pokemon.

Fabulous! So exciting! Love the little hint of Rocketshipping! Btw, I thought the mystery Pokémon was a Purrloin! As its catlike and has yellow markings too! Oh well love it do more!

Here are my 5 questions. 1. Could you be specific on when the fanfic takes place? 2. What locations were used in the fanfic? Be specific. 3. How old was everyone in the fanfic? 4. What Pokémon were owned by the main characters in the fanfic? 5. How long have they owned those Pokémon for? Be sure to answer these questions.

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Great read every time!

You did a wonderful job at captureing a battle made for TV! It wasn't boring at all. It was very well written.

Also, you made me tear up a few times. Poor guys... I teared up when Misty was searching for her sisters; panic gripped me. I teared up when she found them. I also teared up during the battle, because, well, your writing is so detailed I could picture the distruction and crazyness in my head. It was like I was watching TV.