Reviews for unforgive me
CrazyAce'n'PokerFace chapter 1 . 1/23/2015
beautifully written! and a cool look into our favorite jerk of a swordsman's head. poor lenalee, i don't envy her need to be the communicative one in this relationship. anyway, thank you for writing this.
sparkling apples chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Haha, well I did enjoy reading this.
S chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
So real, very nicely written. The 7 sins need not even be included but were a nice touch
Alaude2019 chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Very nice :)
SpazticTwitch chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
I can't think of anything else to say but amazing. You captured Kanda well, which, from what I've read, is a hard thing to do.
Suna Kokaru chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
im not fond of this pairing, mainly because people cant write it properly, they make like lenalee really feisty and badass while kanda cries mainly _ but this is the first story of them that i read and was like O_O i can see that XD you really captured their essence and i love the line when it mentions god, if you take something you have to pay for it and kanda says fine. its captivating and empowering with one word. well written 9/10, missing 10 because it ended _ youll have to write more to get perfect XD
waterlit chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Wow heh. I… am at a loss for words. This was awesome and yeahh. Awesome :D
ToxicCloudz chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
...This... is... Briliant... I have never read anything as amazing as this. I give this a full two thumbs up!
TheRaVen303 chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I'm fairly sure that this is the best Kanda/linali I've ever read.

You should write some more about them, and not because I'm a greedy beast when it comes to one of my fandoms but because you did it so beautifully that it would be a shame otherwise.

greetings from Italy!

( I couldn't believe it when I read you quote Dante. I don't know why but I never realized he was known outside Italy!)
Ada.E chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
I love how you showed kanda displaying all this emotions without making him OOC.
Chiaki Saruwatari chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Love it - so well written! And KanLena is awesome!
infinitymax chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Very nicely done. I think (if you had wanted to) you could have expanded more on each sin into one chapter for each. It would take some time, but I think it would be worth it.
jenny-R chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
This was so well-written. I really like your writing style (and probably will read more of your work) and the way the story flows so smoothly. The idea of using the seven deadly sins was brilliant. You did a great job _
the blanket chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
raw and beautiful. I rather want a Kanda.
Monday the 14th chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Wow! I mean...wow!It's awesome!

One thing, though...luxuria means: abundance, luxury ( I checked with the dictionary:D) But it doesn't really matter, because the fic is absolutely awesome!
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