Reviews for Shiawasena Owari Katanantenai
creativesm75 chapter 8 . 5/16/2009
aww... so sad...
RhesusA chapter 8 . 8/13/2003
I kinda like this story in a sick and twisted way... Pity they committed suicide at the same time... I thought I'd get to see more angst if only one party died and the other party suffered for awhile...
beautiful.dreamer chapter 8 . 1/8/2003
*sigh* this is really depressing...I LUV IT! ; U'r wonderful author, and I hope u'r proud of this grea fanfic (It's gorgeous, one of my fave FoR ficlets!) Good luck on future work, Tenshi-san, it would be awesome to see sum more of your writing...ja matte! *waves*
kim chapter 8 . 4/6/2002
that was great! sad ending though. i really liked it when the 2 of them died like at the same time. it was true love
ReccaGirl chapter 8 . 12/23/2001
Whoah! Awesome climax! It sort of chilled me when I read the very end, because I think it's a powerful expression of how much they care about each other. Recca would rather die than be seen in Yanagi's eyes as the rapist and Yanagi would rather stay in her own dreams of herself and her ninja then face harsh reality. It's a great fic, sad and angsty and emotional but also a strong proclamation of how much Recca and Yanagi love each other. I loved it from beginning to end. Sorry I didn't review this sooner, but I have been really busy with Christmas coming up. And I can totally understand how you observed that the lyrics in my songfic don't fit the story! Merry Christmas:)
yumeyana chapter 8 . 12/21/2001
*sniff sniff* That was a very very good story that I even printed it! I really really like your story and I ended up crying in front of my monitor... waahhh! *sniffs and applauses*
The Blue Sorceress chapter 8 . 12/18/2001
A deeply moving and powerful story, and a equally moving point at the end there... it's nice to see the translation for the title, because I was wondering what it meant, but was also too lazy to go look it up. I can't think of anything better to sum of all eight chapters than that one sentence. You've gotten me playing around with POV now too, 'cept in third person instead of first. I'll be on the look out for your next story, whatever it may be. So long and thanks for all the fish...~ The Blue Sorceress
terminal insanity chapter 8 . 12/13/2001
SAAAAAAAD! they died! it's so romeo and juliet! the first few paragraphs were so happy-ish... and now... i love this story, love angst fics... this DEFINITELY goes on the fave stories list (once it comes back on) and you go on it too! the first FoR fc with recca/yanagi pairing that i've read, and the plot's simple, but so well done! all the feelings, emotions...it's all conyed so well! does this come with a sequel or something? even a short one? doesn't matter if it doesn't... this is god on it's own anyway... the last line really adds impact. WELL DONE!
beautifuldreamer not signed in chapter 8 . 12/11/2001
Wow. What an ending, and to tell the truth...I really didn't expect that to happen. It's very sad Yanagi was raped, but it wouldn't be a angst story if that didn't occur. I really felt somthing for Fuuko, she seemed to be effected so much more differently then the rest of the hokage.

Such a sad story, and I love it!
rhiannon chapter 8 . 12/7/2001
WAHHHHHHHH! YOU KILLED THEM! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILLED THEM! NONONONONONON...;_;

Ok, now that I got that out of my system, yet another great chapter to have read. I just love to read a great angst story! so figure that those two would have died, but really hope that you wouldn't do that. Oh well, still made a great ending to tied the story up. I can't wait to see on how you will do the sequel. You will do a sequel right? Right? Please hurry up and WRITE IT! IF YOU DON'T WRITE A SEQUEL SOON, I'LL COME FIND AND..."cough"

sorry about that. hehehe...-_-;

Can wait for the sequel. Great story.

I just leave now so I won't seem be just rambling on for no good reason, like I am doing now...

Oh...-_-;

BYe
PaladinY chapter 1 . 12/7/2001
I was going to flame you for killing Recca and Yanagi but I admit that you're writing is good.

This fic is sad but it's good can't wait for a sequel hopefully somehow the plot ends even though it's sad already

Great Fic!
Luna Crescent chapter 8 . 12/7/2001
Oh...my...GOD! *cries* How sad! They both really did die! *didn't even realize Yanagi had also commited suicide until she reread the seventh chapter* T.T That was sooooo good! And the ending was wonderfully sad and sweet. Good job! I loved reading Shiawasena Owari Katanantenai and I'm looking forward to the sequal _ Although it kinda pisses me off they didn't find the rapist...but I guess it's like that in real life also. Seeya in your next fic!
Showstopper chapter 8 . 12/7/2001
Beautiful and sad end to this series. I especially liked the memory near

the end. It was appropriate that both died without knowing the other died.

Was hoping that we'd find out who did what in this series, but that's what

sequels are for, :) Well, this will be the last review I give you for a while.

I won't be near a computer for a while, so I guess I'll give you a very

early holiday greeting. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year and

have fun in junior college, :) Peace.
gilAgurL chapter 8 . 12/6/2001
wow...nice but sad ending... there's gonna be a sequel, huh?I can't wait for it!
KarinGatomon Too lazy to sign in chapter 8 . 12/6/2001
;_;. how sad. nice ending! _
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