| Reviews for The Disappearance |
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NARUTOFAN chapter 28 . 7/12 Hiiii can’t wait for more chapters! Please make them UwU that’s all I have to say |
Guest chapter 28 . 3/28 Type your review fic |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/22 Great story so far, just one problem. Remember Naruto learned the Kage Bunshin from the Scroll of Sealing, which contains Konoha’s kinjutsu, meaning only Konoha shinobi should know how to perform and use the Kage Bunshin. If you want to give the shinobi from other villages a clone jutsu it should be of the elemental variety. |
Guest chapter 6 . 1/8 Konoha is a military dictatorship, why doesn’t Tsunade just order the council to shut the fuck up and reinstate Naruto herself ? |
Monster King chapter 28 . 4/17/2019 Great job |
roberthayden895 chapter 1 . 4/21/2018 wow, in tried to stick it out, but the under powered good guys and over powered bad guys was too much. |
Uzumaki spiral chapter 5 . 10/6/2015 This story is boring and the quality is even more half assed and where's the fucking detail |
Guest chapter 28 . 8/25/2015 How in the world could you drop this series at the BIGGEST CLIFFHANGER I've ever seen in my lifee? Aside from that, this was an awesome story, I usually don't hand around long stories, but this was just too good to pass up. |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/15/2015 FYI the improved sharifian is obtained by losing your best friend doesn't have to be killed by you |
Holly of the Night chapter 28 . 11/6/2014 so. It's been five years since you last updated. I guess you're done with the story now, but it was a really great to read! |
Holly of the Night chapter 27 . 11/6/2014 oh my god dude. This storyso far has been fantastic! I especially loved the filler between Ten ten and Naruto. it was new, unique, and felt like a breath of fresh air compared to all the fighting and typical humor. and I have to again applaud the action fight scenes you put in the story. Their creative and amazing to visualize in your own mind the way you narrate. and Im at the point where I just finished Naruto and the manga is now over, but this scene with his mother was just amazing. different like you know, but still amazing in its own creative way of why Kushina left him as a baby. and I can sort of see where she is coming with this. I'm reading The Omen(don't know of u know that) & I suppose she compared Naruto to the ninjas version of a baby devil Damien. cute and innocent looking, but the inside vicious and blood thirsty. I don't have one charter go, but i just want to say what a fantastic job youve done with the characters so far! there's been some moments here and there wherr i wondered, "why would they do that doesn't make any sense" but its nothing compared to all the pros thank you very much for creating such an amazing story |
cruciomyheart chapter 28 . 9/27/2014 I have to say this an amazing story! I do hope you continue this one day! I want to know what happens next! |
Guest chapter 28 . 3/22/2014 This is an AMAZING STORY you have done a great job please keep continuing this story |
Karsus chapter 7 . 8/13/2012 Naruto went away for five years, and barely developed any jutsu? Shocking. |
Tenma Sosei chapter 7 . 8/5/2012 Can I ask why the hell does Naruto have to take the chunin exams seriously? I mean he beat Tsunade in a full battle what the hell does it take to be a jonin fkkk! |