This was a seriously cool fic! XDD
The atmosphere was just like xxxHolic!
I do have to say though, Doumeki's inner self is really funny XDD lol! Cuute

also, I'd like to say the ending was a plothole. WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THEY WAKE UUUUP! XDDD

Well, anyway, Great Fic!

Whispers, was that a prince of tennis reference? or am i going crazy, haha 3

I can't even express to you in words how much I loved this story.
Everything about it was just absolutely perfect.
I had never even seriously considered a relationship on this level between Kimihiro and Shizuka before, and now after reading your amazing stories it seems like the only option. Like maybe that's the way it should always be and have been.
The ending was inspired, I loved it.
Bask in your glorious-ness. BASK! Recieve my adoration! X3
And this mokona shaped cookie!

This story...*wipes away tears* it made me laugh and cry and...all the feelings! Im so sad that its over...thank you so much for being awesome and writing this!

:) :) :)

This was a tremendous work of fiction. I realize that it was written years ago, and this fandom has become either unimpressed or livid at the end of the series, but I use these sorts of stories as a mental bandage.
I love the slow tinkering inside the minds of characters. You have a really good grasp on their realistic characterization, and I appreciate that you took the time to totally flesh out their thought process before running blindly towards fanservice.
(Your characterization of Mokona was my favorite, though, it was absolutely spot-on.)
Thanks for writing such a mature and in-universe donuts story, it was immensely pleasurable to read.
Best of luck in your other writings. If you write more 104 in the future I'd love to see it!

Thank you for writing this story. I may have gotten to it late but I love it so much. I wish that you had continued this beyond that last line but some stories are best left unfinished and up to interpretation. An example of this would be the movie Inception with its controversial ending. Is there more of this story on your livejournal profile? The story you mention at the end "Those Who Favor Fire" is not on your fanfiction story list so I must assume you either changed the name or never posted it here. I would rather not create a livejournal profile just for the express purpose of being able to access your more current fanfiction work.

you, are a very messed up person.

I can't even decide if I liked the ending or not,

like.

WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM?

but at least they had a happy ending, i think ;w;

I also really like the idea of putting Card Captor Sakura into this story :D

I lol'd at Clow's story when he said Yuuko kicked him in the shin and Doumeki saying that boys are "horny bastards" LMAO.

xD 3 I love it 3

You, ma'am, are so very MEAN. I loved this story, don't you think for one second I didn't, but that ending...

You are very mean.

That is all.

you seriously are cruel :S

since the beginning of the story I was curious about how they would meet up in the real world, would there be any changes in the people around them, what would happen, that whole world changing, what exactly is that judgement (haven't read Cardcaptor Sakura) and after I realize there will be none of that, I can't even read his confession and predictable reaction...

well aside from all those it was interesting story

good work

AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWW! that was wonderful! I wished that watanuki's actual confesion and doumeki's reaction were included but i cant deny that this was a good stoping point!

I absolutely adore the story between Yuuko and Clow. In my opinion CLAMP should totally tell the story between them.

they were talking about sakura's brother of course! XD (i don't remember his name though...)

anyway, THAT WAS AWESOME! I never expected watanuki to be the one to advance and take the initiative for their relationship!

kohane-chan's mother is definetly a bitch. i don't know how kohane-chan turned out to be the wonderful person that she is but I am sure glad about it...

"Men are horny bastards," BWAHAHAHA! I swear this Doumeki is gonna make me die of laughter -wipes tears from eyes-. first i though that himawari was gonna be "misfortune" or something...I dont really like her...anyways i just loved that whole conversation at the end between doumeki and watanuki XD.

and that was definetly a reference to Fuji from Peince of Tennis! i dont know anyone else that has a catus fetish like he does lol