Interesting story, but I feel that Naruto is too mean in this story. Sure, this is AU, but everyone knows that Naruto isn't THAT mean... but Sakura sure is. Man, she makes me mad when I read this! Ino, on the other hand, is perfect, really. I like the way you managed to capture her character perfectly!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

your story is intriguing so far. AU's are always interesting, it's also interesting that you describe shikamaru as a gangster. i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the plot and character development.

great first chapter, update soon!

Oh! I do enjoy these types of stories! Please do continue it! You have my interest! ]