I've spent a delightful evening reading your Atlantis stories... and some SG-1... and some Firefly... and a little Sanctuary. You have a real touch for taking a moment and dismantling it, looking at the feelings and ramifications in detail, while keeping it short and sharp. Thank you for a very enjoyable time!

Interesting take on Sheppard in that episode. It was quite dark, yes, but I think you captured him very well. Great job!

Fantastic!

Sheppard carries much guilt with him and I like how well you captured that here. Guilt but he knows he did the right thing. And I think he hates himself for it? I don't have to mull that over a bit more. Sheppard is rapidly becoming one of my favorite characters in the SG universe.

I finally wandered over here to your stories.

I think I shoulda stuck with the Firefly fics.

'Cause this one...*shivers*

Very good.

~Mish

ooh, dark. Loved it

An absolutely perfect summing up of Sheppard's motivation for what he did. Succinct and to the point, your staccato prose style generates the narrative impact necessary for such a dark scenario. Fab!

Perfectly presented! I wondered about John's feelings and how he handled what he did. You've presented a much more hardened character than we've seen before - much like Jack O'Neill. Nicely done! Now, please do one from Wallaces's viewpoint - I'm curious on your take of the situation from his side of the table.

Wow...that was kinda dark...I liked it!

Still haven't seen the epidsode, so now im even more intrigued.

: )

wow...

that was good.

i think thats all i can think of to say.

YES! Greatness. Perfect follow-up to Crossing the Line. Hooray for Dark Shep. The military pragmatist, absent his conscience accountability in Weir. He gets it. Carter would, too. Though I am not sure Carter could have done this personally. But there's a part of me that's very glad Shep could. He just jumped up a major notch in "interesting" to me.

Interesting perspective. I really liked this episode. I figured the man was going to kill himself anyway. He had already said he couldn't go through another loss. And he speeded up his daughters death, and cleared her brain.

I like this little introspection on John's part.I think he will beat himself up over his part. But he will eventually chalk it up to "some damned distasteful things". You do what you gotta do. And like you said, better them than us. Intersting your bit of even shocking the wraith. Yell well, we're a deep species. And some of us are very dark. Wallace started the whole thing by kidnapping McKay and his sister. It was an act of atonement for screwing up.