The first kiss always ends with people bumping their noses into each other and kisses are not heavenly. You get to taste what the other person ate, bad breath, sticky and slimy to a great degree and it is not capable of giving you heaven, no matter how many fics say otherwise.

Dude, you're bloody English needs more work than the vorcha need intelligence. Honestly, you don't need to use the character name Twenty times in the same paragraph when it narrated from their perspective?

By the way, Ash as superman... That's not OP.

No, No, No, No, No... It's not OP at all.

It's a FIC WRECKING MISTAKE THAT BELONGS NOWHERE NEAR THE CANON POKEMON WORLD. Honestly, you would have been better off writing a warhammer fic where you convert the Imperium, Elder and Chaos Gods to the power of love at the rate you're going. That would have at least brought a few laughs. This makes me want to swear off Pokemon fanfics

Well its a good thing that a live-action franchise starring
Pokemon Detective Pikachu
Will be released dated May 10th of 2019.

I believe the rock is called Kryptonite. Also that substance is actually harmful to regular people. Lex Lothor ended up getting cancer from it in a couple of other stories of Superman.

Just finished rereading this story because I love it so much! Anyways, I remember thinking this the first time, but what did Misty whisper into Ash's ear after he kissed her at the end of chapter 13? I didn't know this the first time I read this, but since then I have watched the old superman movies (Superman The Movie & Superman 2), and now I have recognized all of the allusions you have put in this story, and I love them.

Well this story is awesome !
Superman plus pokemon totally loving!

Amazing!

That chapter was a pretty short one but a pretty good one. I like how Ash was introduced as Superman. Also I like how you actually had Misty say he looked like Ash something no one in Superman history has done when no one seemed to have been able to tell him and Clark Kent alike.

That was pretty good start for the story. I'll keep reading.

Another all the above chapter. In fact the story as a whole was an all the above story. Keep up the good work.

An all the above chapter.

Another stupendous great chapter.

A stupendously great chapter.

Another great chapter.

A great chapter.

Another very interesting chapter.