x3 rly rly good I WANNA READ MORE x3

Aw... So many cute moments! I hope you write more stories!

Um, I couldn't help but notice that several times you mentioned that it's been four years since Luke had disappeared. He actually comes back after one year. It would've been nicer if you'd made Anise's section a bit longer but other than that, it's pretty good.

I found some mistakes here and there, but only small ones. Overall, I really liked this idea of portraying everyone's feelings; it was cute. I specially loved that thought of "everyone being Luke's family" and "Jade being the oldest member." XD

Giving titles to each of the sections was interesting too, and they are not really obvious so it's amusing to think a little. I only wish that you had made Anise's section a bit longer.

Thank you for sharing this with us.