Oh yeah, you got those ridiculous drinking laws, you poor sods xD

is there a sequel

When are you going to make Naruto and Gaara have sex

your whole entire story is amazing! I read the whole thing and now I'm re-reading the whole thing again after a week of just thinking about the fic. thx so much for making this fanfic.

I enjoyed this!

I love this story so much!

This was really good i hope theres a part 2.

Oooo sexy and mysterious, and since i forgot he summary, even MORE exciting!

the last chapter just ruined an entirely good story

I'd have loved to see everything play out, but this was pretty damn good! Loved the story as a whole - too bad about Iruka! :(

YOU SOOOOOO HAVE TO WRITE THIS!
AND ANY OTHER SEQUELS TO IT AS WELL!
PLZ PLZ PLZ I WANT TO SEE WAT HAPPENS IN DETAIL . . .
DON'T EVER STOP BEING AWESOME!

OMG I LOVED IT!
DON'T EVER STOP BEING AWESOME!

The plot is good, but your execution is amateur. Your dialogue is a bit childish, and you spend a lot of time explaining things to us, when we already understand. It all seems rather informal, the way the dialogue and the text sounds.
There's also a lot of back and forth explanation, again, between characters that could better be summed up with a few sentences.

Wow this story blew my mind and normally I hate vampire stories. I loved this story but was really sad to see that the story would not be continued. If you have the chance I think you should continue for the sake of all your faithful readers *including me*

I absolutely loved this fanfiction you need to make lots more please *begs* anyways I await your next fanfiction _ I hope it's as awesome as this one :D