| Reviews for Merry and Bright |
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   bikelock28 chapter 2 . 2/6/2019 I love this chapter. I love all you writing on OotP:1- the way you craft people, friendships, rivalries, romances and stories out of people who were literally just names and one old photo in the novels is so impressive. And more impressive is the way you make us care about them! There's so much love and joy in this chapter. I especially like "as good as blind without his glasses but still desperate to see the shape his name makes on her lips". "She'll regret that for the rest of her life (she won't regret for very long) was a great line too. Brilliant writing :) |
| Hetc chapter 4 . 1/20/2019 Poor Daphne. Poor everyone, just about. Good for Seamus, though. Kindeness is under-rated. |
| loveisloveislove chapter 3 . 8/29/2016 I absolutely love fractions. (Whole, if you're wondering) |
| arlene56 chapter 12 . 4/14/2016 I can easily see how anyone would remember Fred Weasley. All of these are beautiful and were a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. |
| arlene56 chapter 11 . 4/14/2016 This is devastating. Beautiful, though. I'm also glad Percy was someone's favorite before he became he hated middle child. The end is just so hopeless. This makes me want to break down crying. |
| arlene56 chapter 10 . 4/14/2016 This was very sweet. |
| arlene56 chapter 9 . 4/14/2016 This is deeply touching. I love Neville. I don't usually give Lavender much though, but I like how strong and brave you make her. |
| arlene56 chapter 8 . 4/14/2016 This is so sad. It's such a long time to be without her. |
| arlene56 chapter 7 . 4/14/2016 You describe Marlene so beautifully. |
| arlene56 chapter 6 . 4/14/2016 This is an interesting take and I enjoyed reading it. I really liked the comparisons between the three sisters. |
| arlene56 chapter 5 . 4/13/2016 Surprisingly, this chapter makes me think ofEon, who was more concerned with his family than the rest of the world. It's an interesting idea. Sometimes that kind of sacrifice, the choice to look after your family first, is necessary. |
| arlene56 chapter 4 . 4/12/2016 Daphne's life seems very difficult. Things are terrible for many of her classmates at the point, but I can feel how hollow she must be. I liked that the ending had a bit of hope for better times. |
| arlene56 chapter 3 . 4/12/2016 You managed to give such an interesting view of Katie's life in a short chapter. I love the way you painted her, Alicia, and Angelina. |
| arlene56 chapter 2 . 4/12/2016 This chapter was sweet, then heartbreaking. You have an interesting style that can be very sad without being dark. |
| arlene56 chapter 1 . 4/12/2016 This chapter is beautiful and sad, but with a feeling of hope. |
