Excellent fic. Your writing style is very very mature and very very impressive! I think you've captured Xiao and Zhou's contrasting personalities very well and and have successfully weaved it in seamlessly with the plot.

I really like the short-stories approach - each story starts afresh giving you plenty of breath to further elaborate on a particular theme, which you have done extremely well. Please continue to write more!

that was really good... good job[:

I really like how the story iz going.! plz keep writing.!

i like it, it's very descriptive and a good story,too.

Wow! Really good writing, very descriptive. I thought the story was really easy to picture, and the people were in character. The 2nd chapter was especially good. Thumbs up, keep writing! _

i've been looking for Dynasty Warriors fanfics and ur one is actually pretty good lol. continue writing this story i want to knowhow it ends. maybe she could sneak out of the castle with her sister and go onto the battle field and fully save zhou yu's ass! lol, my imagination goes a little loopy sometimes lol

Great! This is my favorite couple in the whole DW series

I look foreward to reading more, your chappters are well written and very descriptive

-Ying