Aww, cute!

This was really cute. At first I thought roxas wasn't going to come back and I was all "oh noes" but yay! He did! :D Ive read almost all if your kingdom hearts fanfics and I have to say I love them all:D

Awwww... :) That helps everything that happened in KH2. :D

It's such a shame that this was never continued. The writing was perfect, amusing, captivating, and whatever further compliments you'd like. I really loved reading this. I wish it could have turned into something still longer, so I could enjoy your writing for a bit longer, but it works well as a oneshot (much as I hate to say that).

Thank you for writing, of course.

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! PLEASSE! you can't just let it end there. You're killing me, blue! please continue. please. *gets on knees and begs*

that brought out the giggles

i loved it.

Ohmygodd.

That was awesome. I don't know if you were going to leave it as a one-shot or what, but you could definitely add another chapter without bringing down the first chapter.

I lloved it.

I like this story alot. It was well written though I was confused about how Axel knew Roxas and why he is with Riku.

RIKUROKU? Where?

What did I tell you about completely adoring you?

Anyways, best two moments of this fic: the part where Axel is preforming CPR on Roxas (not so much for the kind-of kiss as much as the fact that Axel must have been panicking pretty badly.) and Roxas's nightmare, and Axel comforting him.

The random kiss was good too.

*totally happy sigh* THAT...was the best "next life" story I've ever read. It's basically too good for the category. _

I think I'll go to bed now, with that one in my head. If I'm really lucky it'll become a nice dream. _

Even if it doesn't, thanks for the great read. _

i really think this story is cute, you should continue!

and continue until the all known 'happily ever after'

well maybe after some turns and stuff but i'll be here.

i like it, i really do.

now i'm demanding -Keep writing(typing hehe)

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Squee.

I don't really have anything more coherent to say.

That was just lovely, absolutely lovely.

Now you need to make this into a two shot where Roxas and Axel become a pair and have makeup sexxeh time plzkthxbai

As much as I did enjoy many aspects of the story, the ending confused me a lot. Maybe I'm just an idiot, but I didn't really get whatever it was you were trying to get across...at least, I don't think I did. Is Roxas suffering from chronic amnesia or depression? Or is it something else? And Riku's comment about Sora made me curious, as that's never really explained either.

It would be lovely if you would consider extending this or revamping it, because while I think that the concept behind your story is interesting, the fic as it stands is somewhat incomplete.

On a more positive note, your Axel is ridiculously endearing and I love how you write RoxasAxel interaction:)

~sorceress115