| Reviews for Heart Broken |
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  nikky chapter 30 . 8/1/2017 Its amazing don't write/say it's not great it really is, I love it |
| Guest chapter 34 . 6/12/2017 in the very beginning, this story seemed "cute"... young, but cute... then as i continued to read, it just got very juvenile. i assume the writer was very young when she wrote this. of course, she may be older and wiser now and this may have been just a learning curve... some of the parts of the story that are not very funny at all, the characters were laughing about and some of the things said and the way they were said were surprisingly disappointing... this story had some cute points but was very immature and hopefully the writer did learn from all of the reviews and her own experience. |
| KLJ chapter 35 . 7/1/2014 Update soon? |
 barbiedoll123 chapter 35 . 3/24/2014 Yes keep updating all your stories |
| Scattycow chapter 9 . 1/12/2013 Jeez! What are you five? This is terrible. Spelling, grammar, sentence structure is awful. One dimensional characters, ridiculous plotline. Not surprised you abandoned it. Thats what children usually do! |
| unknown 020202 chapter 34 . 4/23/2011 Loving it, please write more! |
| jaki chapter 5 . 1/24/2011 you have a awesome plot, it's just that i think that you should slow down, i've only read a couple of chapters and i feel that your story is too rushed, your writing skills are ok but i think that it could be better. maybe you should try describing your characters and setting more? |
| EmmaMariexx chapter 33 . 11/22/2010 good story :) |
| Deleted53926 chapter 34 . 4/6/2010 i liked it! more! :D |
| satinerip chapter 1 . 10/3/2009 oh yah, so totally love it. :) keep wriing |
| Brown eyed Writer Girl chapter 34 . 9/8/2009 please update soon! i love ur story |
| shades of blue 262 chapter 33 . 8/11/2009 luv it |
| KaylaKillJoy chapter 34 . 8/11/2009 WoW! |
| JustThatGirl97 chapter 28 . 7/8/2009 LOL! Willie? I burst out laughing as soon as i read THAT! LOL! Ill just carry on reading now ;) That darn Willie...lol! |
| Stronger than you since 1915 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009 JERK with a capital J! |
