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Tsaritza Mika chapter 9 . 11/24/2009 I've been meaning to send a review out for a while, and finally I have time to do so! Yay! I love all of these little ficlettes, but my fav would definately be 'Chocolate'. The scenario is just too perfect. Gotta wonder if they really would give in that easily if the situation presented itself. XD You're also getting much better with your english writing, keep it up cause these are really good! |
LennaVanU chapter 1 . 6/12/2009 *_* i love it! good thing im learnig french so i can read all ur fics |
lescribble chapter 12 . 5/23/2009 This series is pure brilliance! I especially loved the chapter entitled "Chocolate." Hahaha. Pretty hot (and sneaky) what they were doing there. And for a while, in chapter Ice Cream, I thought you would be sitting them side by side... and that Sousuke would be secretly stroking her thigh or something. :D haha... but you gave us a better plot. It's sad to see that status "Complete." But, well, who knows in the future. :P I'll patiently wait for your English fics to surface. :D |
luinda chapter 12 . 11/4/2008 Such a good collection of steamy stories. I love each and every one of them! Sousuke & Kaname for the win |
Anrita chapter 12 . 9/13/2008 I absolutely love the way you write! It's not sloppy and lost in translation. I do wish I could read french. Please try and come out with more english stories if possible. lol |
Tairi Soraryu chapter 2 . 8/20/2008 Another nice one-shot. ) I like SousukeKaname lemons. Only mistake I noticed was "tension go down"...grammatically, it should "tension goes down", but "tension" isn't the right word in this context. Unfortunately, I can't think of a good alternative. I'll PM you if one comes to mind. Good job! |
Tairi Soraryu chapter 1 . 8/20/2008 Good job! I didn't notice any overt errors, except the final line - in English translation, Sousuke's trademark line is generally translated "it is not a problem". I like the pacing and the sequence of this fic, congrats on a good job translating! |
Snowing Moon chapter 12 . 8/13/2008 Aww, I'm going to miss this awesome series! Great job, this one was wonderfully done as usual, from my point of view. Well, hope to see more of your works in the future! Byebye...:DD |
GoldAngel2 chapter 1 . 8/10/2008 Nicely done...delving into the vast well that is Sousuke is no easy task and you did just that, showing the desolation he would feel if she ever did reject him... It reminded me of the scene in the TDD when Sousuke saved her and she said that she'd be fine on her own...and he begged her not to... Great job |
Lori chapter 11 . 7/22/2008 FINALLY! A good couple fic with Sousuke and Kaname! I really like one shots, so you don't have to stick to a story line if you don't want to. If you get the chance and an idea pops in your head, then WRITE it. Update soon please, I'll be waiting |
Iloveichiruki chapter 11 . 7/1/2008 I'm so happy! A new chapter! Thank you, thank you, thank you! i really love your stories, and this one...oh! I love Sousuke! You make him look so hot! I like that sometimes he's kinda agressive, I don't know.. i love when he's the one taking the the first step. I love the way you write, so I finally found a language translator, and i'm trying to translate your fics written in French. It's too hard, (especially because my english sucks and I couldn't find a translator french/Spanish)but I'll give it a try! hopefully, someday I will be able to read all your stories! Bye, and thanks! Cinthia |
Steph chapter 10 . 6/3/2008 I've really enjoyed the grouping; you are an excellent writer. Thanks for the yummy goodness :) |
Snowing Moon chapter 10 . 5/13/2008 Wow, continuing that would make my day. You did an excellent job, in my opinion, in all of your stories. (Especially for a previous non-English speaker.) I sure hope you keep writing; there are too few Full Metal Panic stories in English. You have my support! |
bellamuerte7 chapter 10 . 5/12/2008 i really liked this chapter, i love how you describe how each of them are seeing eachother...i can totally picture it! |
Athrun.knight chapter 10 . 5/12/2008 Lol!If I had to nominate a 'almost kiss' scene for FMP, i Really prefer this one,instead of the one where she gives him a haircut! |