update please...

Please continue, I reallt want to know what happens between Vincent,Chaos,and Cid. It's too interesting to stop here!

Ooooooooooh! This is new

Awesome. I hope you continue soon~

poor cloud, i feel sorry for him. i wonder what will happen next. gl with the next chapter :)

I just loved this chapter! Poor Vincent really needs to listen to Chaos but with the demon kidnapping Cid's crew Vin will probably just keep hiding. You would think with how much Cid loved what Chaos and Vin did to him that Vincent wouldn't be so afraid to admit his feelings. Too bad. I guess that's the life of an emo, lol. Does Yuffie have any idea of Vincent's feelings for Cid? Because it sure doesn't sound like she does.

I can't help but like the wat Sephiroth was in here. Those little flashes of sanity are what makes the Sephiroth/Cloud relationship so dark yet fluffy. The part where Seph was sucking all the air out of Cloud's lungs described their relationship perfectly, still that would have been a sucky way to die. Please update soon! I want to see the Vin/Cid conclusion and if Sephiroth every truly regains his sanity!

Keep up the good work -

I think Cid just lost his dignity

anywho review

Great chapter. -

Poor Vincent. I hope Cid can help him. Great chapter. -

Screams this is totally awesome

i wanna read more :( what gona happen to cloud. i feel so sorry for him :(

I really don't know how to feel about Sephiroth.

Go Cloud, go! You can do it!

xD

Please write more. I L-O-V-E this story.

It's really good so far. -