aw, i liked it!

thank you so much! :)

It's beautiful.

Then I remember how everything about Godot was tragic.

Just - thank you for this.

Wow, that was good. So well described, and the feeling of losing hope and immense frustration were very well portrayed.

This is beautiful. For less than 1,0 words, this is a triumph- I've always imagined this scene in my mind, and you've perfected it for me. Diego is supurb... and, as much as I hate her, I love Dahlia's... two lines of dialogue.

Very, very nice.

I'm a new fan of the games, but Diego's story was definitely the saddest part of T&T. And he'd seemed like a comic-relief character until I found out what happened. And I'd wondered what it felt like, to wake up and found out the woman you loved was dead. You did a nice job capturing that.

Godot... What a sad dude. That whole last case just left me reeling. Excellent fill-in for his vague little monolouge. Really have to feel for him now, poor guy. Imagine waking up to that! (Actually I guess I don't have to, since you've written it so well, huh? Haha)

OBJECTION~~

This was amazing! I even got all misty-eyed near the end. I love how you portrayed Godot.

Wow... was so sad... I'm adding it to the Coffee and Kittens community on here Thanks for writing good Miego!

Oh... I'm at a loss for words. And now my keyboard's wet because I went and cried on it. D: You've captured our Godot perfectly - thoughts, emotions, and reactions. Poor guy needs a hug, doesn't he? And now I wanna strangle Dahlia Hawthorne even more, the little *navi*.

...So now I'm just rambling. What I'm trying to say is that you've got a lovely piece of work here.

Keepy Uppy.

~LK

This is a beautiful piece of writing. I think you captured Diego and Mia's relationship very well. :)

Nicely done.

kjsadaksjdhak ow. But... Awesome.