I know you made this as groundwork for Kaka/Naru (I'm assuming pairing) I am taking it as a older brother watching over the younger brother thing.

so good QuQ loved it tho i did wish it had more but it still ended perfectly :'DD

Then sorrow, the sickness,
Then the shock when you flip it on me,
So hollow, so vicious,
So afraid I couldn't let my self see,
...
And these promises broken,
Deep, feeble,
Each word gets lost in the echo.
So one last lie,
I can see though,
this time I've finally let you go.
...
And I've come back unshaken
Let down and lived and let go
So you can let it be known
I don't hold back, I hold my own
...
Gomenasai for everything
Gomenasai, I know I let you down
Gomenasai till the end
I never needed a friend
Like I do now
...
Linkin Park, Lost in the Echo-Gomenasai, t.A.T.u.

love it

Sweet tearjerker

sequal please!

I really think there could be another chapter here, just to follow up with what you introduced in this

I really liked it, & I think your ideas for the fic are good, even if Kakashi speaks a little unnaturally

BUT! IT DOESN'T HAVE TO BE A KAKANARU! NOT THAT THERE'S ANYTHING WRONG WITH THAT! I actually don't ship that pairing-& I think that based on this fic, it's not even obvious that they'd hook up! :D So, you might get MORE READERS if you didn't put that! Of course, it's your fic... YOU CAN CHOOSE! :3

awww...cute

wow...awesome story! Is there a sequel?

I love this story and think you should continue it

Please update soon

That was so good i loved it please write another chapter

NOOOO! KEEP GOING WITH THE STORY! ANOTHER CHAPTER! Like saying how Sakura and Sasuke will be kind, or if Naruto finds out he cries in his sleep, or even if Kakashi-sensei will say something inspirational or kind to Narito!

:) As you can probably tell, I LOVED IT!

One request...MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! :)

thats so sad... I have a hard time crying, but I can't imagine the sorrow involved to induce constant tears every night while sleeping... well done :)

AWE! Its just... just... so cute! I absolutely love it! Gosh, i cant get over how cute and fluffy it is and at the same time its semi-dark! :3 Great work!