this is cute :)

I love it!

Normally a line like that which Hanschen uses to describe Melchior would be tacky and ridiculous, like a bad pick-up line, but it wears so well on him and his beautiful drawl. Adored it.

*giggles* This has perfect characterization, and I absolutely adore the allusion to Greek mythology. And might I say that I want to give Ernst a huge hug for being so sweet and nervous? Excellent work.

Cute. I'd love to see these specific characterizations developed into a full-blown plot. I really liked how you portrayed Hanschen and Ernst.

Oh, Hanschen. Be still, my heart. I quite enjoyed this.

~Ani

Aww. Cute... You wrote Hanschen really well.

“We learned it. Just…today. You know the- the formula. That we learned today? Yes, I think it was today.”

That line made me laugh. Good job!