The interaction between Naru and Lin was great. It reminded me of Sheldon and Leonard from Big Bang theory for some reason and I loved it

this story was marvelous! Original in the plot and execurion... but like, this is so incredible I'm shocked that I'm reading it just now!

Best fan fiction story ever. Well written and the characters were ON POINT

Sigh...Naru's going to make Mai cry, isn't he?

I enjoyed the story! I like your perspective on Naru's character. Just, kinda wondering if Yasu is still on the library... Poor yasu lol

I really like your story. I think you did a good job on Naru's (possible) character and on the others as well. Thanks!

Nah !I'm more of an ice cream person when it comes to movies!But thanks for the offer!

LOL XD I think it's adorable how Naru wants to keep planning his future with Mai. It just shows how committed he is to her :) And I hope it continues to stay that way for the many years to come.

The way Naru just tossed his plans out the window and gave Mai a kiss was .. So. Freaking. Cute! XD And then when he guided her to the door and waited for her to lock it I started cracking up! LOL XD I could totally see this happening!

LMFAO XD I can totally imagine Yasu going through all that trouble just to find out Naru's "master plan." He's really turning into a little investigator, isn't he? ;) Too bad it was just a cover up for Naru's real date with Mai. Oh, I wonder what he has planned for her next! :D

Yeah, I can definitely see Yasuhara being a problem :P I mean, once he latches onto somethings it's pretty hard for him to let go. But I'm sure Naru will find a way to keep him off his trail ;)

Oh, my God! Naru is an evil genius! LOL XD He came up with a fool proof plan to ask Mai out without actually asking her! And by the time she figures it out they'll have been dating for over a month now. Wow, I guess all that planning really will pay off in the end. LOL XD

Well, I can't say Masako wasn't asking for it because we all know how Naru feels about "Love Confessions." Besides, he already has his heart set on Mai ;)

Well, damn ... I wonder what Naru did to make Masako cry like that. I mean, I may not be her biggest fan, but that's taking it a bit too far. But to be fair, Mai did try to warn her ... So~ *shrugs* What can you do?

LMFAO XD This is so fucking Naru right now! I mean, seriously! Who the fuck makes a file for someone that they plan on going out with?! And we all know the only reason he's doing this is because he likes Mai :P Work performance and professionalism be damned~