So I just simply say they are indeed soulmate to hav to have the same dream hahaha

Funny, sexy and cute

u kept them in character. I love them

So cute!

I read this a while back ago, and I wanted to comment on it as soon as I actually decided to sign up(which has taken me a couple years) This fic turned me onto this website and fandom in general..So Thanks!

me gusto! *-*

awesome!

Dude, don't stop writing lemons. EVER. This was really good, and it was also kinda sweet, since...well...okay, I guess it was just sweet because I thought it was...Oh, well! I LOVED IT! Awesome job. Also, in that situation, I don't think the characters were all that OOC. I mean, I'm not sure Orihime would have a wet dream, or talk to Tatsuki about it, but if she did both of those things, I can totally see Tatsuki doing something like that. I mean, she might want to protect Orihime, but if Orihime wants something...well, have you ever noticed a time in the anime/manga when Tatsuki DIDN'T give Orihime what she wanted? (Okay, that sounded really sexual, but seriously, have you?) So, I think Tatsuki, in this situation, would have surmised that Orihime wanted to fuck Ichigo, so she created a situation where that was more likely to happen. Also, Ichigo was perfect, in my opinion. We never really see him in a situation where he would be ABLE to think about a girl that way, but judging on his character, I'd say that before Rukia came, as long as spirits weren't around him, I think he was you're average, hormonal, perverted teenage guy. However, Ichigo's also generally a nice person, so he wouldn't want to hurt his friend by ruining their relationship by falling in love with her. So, I think you really got their personalities down correctly. One thing I will say is that, apart from honorifics, I think it's kinda bad form to use Japanese words in fanfics. Obviously, words like shinigami are alright, since there's a different connotation from shinigami than death god. However, ohaiyo has no real connotation apart from what level of politeness you use with it (Orihime would probably say "ohaiyogosaimasu, since she's female. Not being sexist here, it's just that in Japan, females are supposed to use some level of polite speech, and, Orihime being a rather typical girl, she'd use polite speech), so you should just use the English "good morning." Otherwise, you might confuse some readers who've read the translated version of the manga, or who've watched the dubbed version, or who haven't been able to learn Japanese simply from watching anime. It's best not to confuse readers with language barriers. Confusing us a little with plot is fine, but language barriers should be kept where they're supposed to be, in my opinion -. Adding to favorites. Great lemon. Loved it. Ganbatte!

loved the smut! nicely done.

lil dirty

(but thats a lemon for yah!)

haha but i liked it XD

More, more, more, OrihIchi lemons lol. Go, go, go. Naw lemme' stop. This is awesome work from beginning to end. Too bad it was only in his dream. I hope he didn't jizz in his pants in front of his peers. Otherwise utter humiliation for the rest of his high school career I'm afraid.

nice story

“N… Kurosa… Ah! Nmph… Kurosaki-kun!”

it made me laughed...

Crazy... I love this one..

write more, StarryRavenFire..

Heyy, dont worry that was awesome haha, pity your not writing anymore.

Arigatou!

Wow they predicted everything in a wet dream now that is something! It5 was really a great Fanfiction!-