Absolutely beautiful! xx

Wow. An interesting take. And very well written too! I could never dream about this one. Brutus and Octavia.. Well.. but nice perspective.

I love this story! You really capture the emotion of the situation. Please more Brutus/Octavia! :)

YES! I luv B/O fanfics!

Wow, I never even considered this pairing, but you wrote them so well and made it beliveable. Great oneshot, a pleasure to read.

Oh my god, this is awesome. Brutus/Octavia ftw! ...I'm not a crazy shipper, I swear.

This was made of WIN. I loved it and the pairing. Fab work.

I think this story is great,and the pairing Octavia/Brutus was totally neglected until now.

You very well described Brutus.

soo soo soo soo good. You have Brutus exact! Very nicely written even if its not a pairing I would usually go for. I love how you write him though! just great.

I love it! It's really good. It's like my fic...but well written. Good job!

i really enjoyed reading this, it was very well written and job. i hope you keep it up. you've got talent.

Very nice story and so in character. I have always been fond of Brutus&Octavia pairing and wish the series had ignored the history in that case ;)

thanks