Reviews for Onyx Black
girl4eversweet chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
OWMYGAWD! This is the best ever story! Make a twist will you? If you don't I will and I'll leave credit! SO GOOD! *mindblow* o.O
Crazycally chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
nice work
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
This was really mesmerizing, wish u wrote about the mission though
Kyanie chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
nicely written
mymanisfictional chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Very nice. Usually I'm not a fan of drabbles, but I ike this.
tori chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
that was an amazing story, but i wish you would have wrote more. it was great!

tori
DulcetPoison chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
:) NICE :)
wirbil chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Well I didn't think Neji had it in him to do it but this is just so adorable! Squee .
Raesa chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Loved the Neji and TenTen paring, one of my absolute favorites!

The way you wrote the the story was very well too.

Great job.
BlackRoseOfTheGrave chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Oh, me likey! I love that pairing! I love Neji and TenTen extremely! I loved the way you wrote this fanfic
Crouching Tiger Hidden Shizuru chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Me likes, me likes.

Me likeing is good.

I,

Shou-Shuang; Lasting Frost

Have graced you with my presence.

FEEL HONOURED!
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Nice story!
Yugao chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Oh nice. It was a good read, so thanks so much.

~ yugao.
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
That was great! I love the idea of TenTen in that black dress and seducing their target and Neji getting jealous. But TenTen is always going to be Neji's.
DcDreamer chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Humorous?

Well I for one am glad that you failed at that, I love little drabbles like these that actually have a plot!

You're an excellent writer you caught the essence of the moment well and incarnated Neji's character.

I really have no critique I would give this five stars...

So now I say please keep writing!
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