Overall a good story! Not into the overdose of triple dots but otherwise good plot and I like the scenes pointing to the real movie. Inuyasha's character seems well planned, and I love the guys' interactions haha.

The story because it sounds like they're dragging their words which is not normal in everyday speech, otherwise good story so far!

I know this is long past, but I hope you lay off on the triple dots in the future in dialogue. Maybe it's not very important but for some (like me) it changes the tone of

awesome, I love this story so very much. thank you very much, Hope that you'll continue writing.

wooww... graeat chapter...

Oh wow this story was just pure amazingness! I've never watched this "She's the man" movie but i'm seriously considering it now thanks to you.

nice chapter..

um. this is amazing. story. characters. dialogue. all brilliant. and beautiful. thank you. bless you.

Pretty sure I've read this before back when I didn't have an account yet. But I only seem to remember the first couple of chapters.

ANYWAY. Amazing adaptation of the film, I love how you write and I love all the added scenes you threw in. This was better paced compared to the film, if I may say so myself. The build-up of the two's relationship makes more sense since they actually have one-on-one bonding moments (like that trip to Inuyasha's house, the date they had in the Carnival, that second date in Mishiu(?), etc.) that weren't in the film.

And I love that you added an epilogue.

To sum it up, great work, keep writing, and thank you for the ride! :D

So so so so sos so so so cute:) I love Kagome's determination to prove that girls are equals and can be better than boys! She was sweet and lovely and her character was developed beautifully. Inuyasha wasn't the signature "I'm cocky and a player," and instead was this shy guy who was awkward around girls, and I really loved that vibe. It's super refreshing and I think it's an awesome way to look at it. I'm just personally alittle confused on how she can look so differently just by switching a wig and having thicker eyebrows but I still adored this cute little story.

I love this story! Go Kagome and Inuyasha!

I just reread this story again and I absolutely loved it. Even more than the first time I read it.
This story never bored me.
I finished the whole story in one day even though I had a lot of homework due.
And the ending was perfect.

Ohmigosh i loved this so much! My absolute favorite!

Let the love triangle begin MWAHAAHAHA
poor kags the longer she stays as souta the more complicated this will end up,
Nice story :3

I don't like the fact in fanfics, is that when inuyasha hurts kagome, she easily forgives him. And then when kagome hurts inuyasha, he takes forever to even try to talk to her. It is really annoying. But good story nonetheless.