| Reviews for Broke Me Up |
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David Fishwick chapter 5 . 3/16/2012 Brilliant and thanks for writing. |
Bob chapter 5 . 7/4/2009 Good twist on LIAB. |
Palex4Ever chapter 5 . 4/7/2008 o..m..f..g the best Palex ever. finally one that lasts in a HAPPY ending for the both of them write more! |
ImogenSantamaria chapter 5 . 1/21/2008 Awesome update! It got me all giddy. I love that Paige finally expressed how she really feels for Alex. It took her long enough, but she did it nonetheless. :)Sorry I've been kinda MIA, but at least I didn't miss the ending :) Btw... America's Next Top Model... Ah come on now :P lol. :D |
Momo The Great chapter 5 . 1/21/2008 *claps hands* bravo! bravo! |
brokenvoice chapter 5 . 1/21/2008 aw this one's so cute. I'm a big fan of Palex and i love this story. i'm glad your keeping up with it. :] |
squintsquad03 chapter 5 . 1/21/2008 Happy now. I'm glad all is right with the world of Palex. |
squintsquad03 chapter 4 . 1/7/2008 I'm glad Alex is okay. I liked Paige telling Jay he should stay. Love Alex waking up. :) |
kangaroos chapter 4 . 1/6/2008 aw.. nice chapter. |
phyca chapter 3 . 12/16/2007 Hm... I can only repeat what has been said, that it is a blessing for a fanficcer, especially one with your creds, to rewrite that POS episode. That episode makes me want to cry for all the wrong reasons; this fic for all the right reasons. Can't wait to read the rest! |
Doesn'tMeanMuch chapter 3 . 12/16/2007 Once again...just friggin' brutal. I like that Jay was appropriately harsh. The whole world doesn't sugarcoat things just because it might hurt your feelings, Jay especially. And Paige was definitely being a bitch. If you treat people like crap, they're eventually going to throw your own shit back in your face. So thanks for that little bite of the truth. And thanks for giving at least something to go on with Alex, not just leaving the whole thing up in the air, even if you are stringing this out as long as you can. Not a bad way to get more hits and reviews I'd expect. Completely interested to see where running away is going to land Paige, and still definitely digging this story. Damn good job my friend, -Doesn'tmeanmuch |
April chapter 3 . 12/16/2007 Yikes Jay really put to Paige. Very cold yet I guess in Jay's way that's the best he could do, LOL. Hopefully we'll read more loving Paige in the chapters to come and she doesn't blame much of this on herself. I didn't mind her getting the job of her dreams though she could had helped Alex through those two weeks instead of having only hot sex (though I wish we could had seen that, LOL). And of course Alex improved on herself in school and didn't care anymore. These both need redemption badly. Great story, please continue! |
ImogenSantamaria chapter 3 . 12/15/2007 Wow Jay really put it on Paige, huh? "She must be crazy to think you were worth it." Ouch... :-/ Someone needed to let Paige know what was going on, but that was a bit too harsh. Ok maybe not quite that harsh. :) I really hope to see a turn around in Paige, love. She really needs to see the light. Btw I am so glad that Alex really is only having problems with her arm. That's great :)Speaking of great... great update as always. You NEVER disappoint. |
squintsquad03 chapter 3 . 12/15/2007 That's so sad. I loved Marco's "I'm family" routine. Can't wait for Alex to get out of surgery. |
sweetdebie chapter 2 . 12/15/2007 Nice start More please? |