Good story. The last two lines killed me.

Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. Lovely story. But ouch.

Wow, you really pulled my heart-strings with this one! Loved it!

Ow ow ow ow.

I like it - how you've infused the panic from Dean about Sam. How Sam gets what he wants - when he's bleeding out. It was a CLOSE call!
Love the story Dean remembers about Mom and Dad, at Sammy's crib.

"I hope you tell me someday."
"I hope I never have to."

With each ensuing story, your writing becomes stronger and the boys' voices become clearer. Thank you.

Oh my gosh, this was amazing. It was very heart wrenching and nearly brought tears to my eyes. I must say, you did a phenomenal job of keeping them in character. I could see this happening in an actual episode :D Great job ;)

ahh this is great. :) it's so realistic

Great job! I especially loved that line, ”... but Dean is only thinking Sam.” Seriously, all the feels!

Sammy gets what Sammy wants, Dean is just a grumpy softie.

! that was great i loved it the end was perfect whens hes like "i hope i never have to" and i like the but about Madison.

Awesome story! :)

Very sweet and heartwrenching.

Great story.

That was simply wonderful! :D Seriously!