huahahahaha

awesome man!

ayumu (maman mode) will certainly be such a good mom!

and imagine hi m wearing a dress after being a mom, then one day, their kids screamed...

"what? you're a man?" (from a fanfic about kaname x zero)

hehehe

I AM sorry there isn't more HizumixAyumi. Might you consider this pairing again? I like it almost better than KanonexEyes (probably would if KanonexEyes didn't seem so canon!).

Adam and Eve analogy was intriguing - creating instead of destroying. I liked Hizumi making the parallel with their older siblings and Ayumu's acknowledgement of the logic. Lol.

-Punches the air- HELL YEAH!

This one made me smile, too. ) Just cause I'm a happy monkey person. Or penguin person.

! -battle cry and pulls invisible sleeves up- LET'S GO!

Ha ha. Once again (I reviewed the other first because clearly that was the one above this one), a very good fic! D

Grah. I was doing an EyesxAyumu one, but, but, but-I just need to do HizumixAyumu first! D And now my RikuxSora ones must be put on hiatus (or however the hell you spell it) because you're amazing and inspire the hell out of me!

-Jessica and Zexion

Ah, We need more HizumiAyumu Love! and they both live together? since when this happened? oh and Rutherford explaining to Ayumu is what chapter again? soory for asking! not to that point yet i seems.

OH-M-GEE!

so awesome you did a great job.

I just started reading the series like a week ago and am also seriously disappointed with the lack of stories. I mean come ON! Two of the kawaii-est characters EVER living together?

lol oh well. You did a great job, pretty please write some more of this pair?

Neko~

Actually, you kow, your English seems to be pretty damn good. Aside from random spaces between punctuation, anyway, but I can live with thst. And I finally got to read the Spiral Manga (up until volume 13, anyway...) and I'm glad that, even if there's only one other person, somebody else supports the Hizumi/Ayumu pairing. (And to think, that was the only reason that I actually decided to look for Spiral fanfiction on here...)

But *really* good job on this. I mean it!

I love this story! I've been waiting for someone to write one with Hizumi and Ayumu!

Thank you for making this...

Like what the other reviewers (and you) said, it's about time this site had a HizumixAyumu Fanfic. I've done searches before and found "NAH-DAH"

When I first saw Hizumi in the manga, I thought this place was already swimming in HizumixAyumu stories... But unfortunately, it isn't.

We have to fix that soon won't we? *wink*

Thanks again! This is wonderful!

_Peace Out_

Lol that was so cute XD im guessing Hizumi acts like that waay then? if so i think im gonna like him a lot. XD

Well i say you did an excellent job on Ayumu i can defently say that _ as for Hizumi i havent seen him yet but judging from pics i saw (well that one picture anyway with Hiyono, Ayumu and Hizumi) it looks like you got him well. XD

If your the person i think you are its me Ayaogicesthime from lj down at the Spiral comm :D oh i decided to open a Hizumi x Ayumu clud down at y hosting to today when i was reading this. XD

Just luffles demon x angel love

I love you!

I finally find a HizumixAyumu fic

I love this couple

I love you!

I was just looking for a HizumiAyumu fic and was sad when I didn't find one.

This story is great. Thank you for making my day.