Please delete this, please.

Really? (sarcasm evident)

Omg I couldn’t stop laughing

Awwwwwww I love it

I'm not hating it but not loving it. I could maybe get over the OOC because it's your story but I think it would be better if you slowed down... It just fel rushed like wham bam thank you maam. No pun intended. ;)

what the fu ck no please god no delete this god no this is awful pleas god no delete this

I LOVE THIS STORY!

Whoa... this is not good...I stopped at chapter 3

I was quite surprised by the plot. Severus rapes Hermione at the start of the story but does she know about his double life? Then in the next chapter she willingly let's him into her home and leaves him alone with her son. I couldn't imagine this being a very realistic situation.

Just read your bio. How ironic that you won't continue reading a fix for "street talk" when your own writing is so juvenile I felt wrong reading your smut scenes. As in, I was genuinely concerned a 12 year old was trying to write porn.

Also, not a sporker or whatever weird ass term you are trying to make cool. Just someone genuinely concerned that a 12 year old was writing smut fics who has become even more horrified by the fact that a grown woman wrote them. Egads.

Signed,

A normal sized, well loved, non cheeto eating reviewer

Wait. You are old enough to have children and wrote this drivel? I thought for sure a 12 year old had written this. Wow. Like how do you function as an adult? If you talk like you write then you nust be confused as a young teen all the time.

Love this story so much

Lovely story. I love a story where Severus gets his happily ever after :)

Nice
I never knew snape could be so loving

The was a beautiful story. I LOVED all the humor. I also like how Ginny and Draco was paired together. I was an absolutely wonderful story!