love it

Get away from the edge Misa! That was a very good ending, I had a shiver down my spine and could almost see her falling.

Suppperrrrrrrr

Oops not supper, which I'm about to have, but supercalifragelisticexpeali...
Yeah. Loved it!

This was so amazing. Great job!

I feel so bad for Misa :(

"Misa-Misa is confused.

Without Light there's only grays and sharp pain, and without L there's a soreness and an ache.

Misa-Misa misses both of them so much.

Misa-Misa thinks she's going to jump."

That last part was wonderful.
So sad, and and tragic and beautiful, and the poor confusion on this beautiful girls face.
Oh, Misa.
:"(
I wish she didn't committ suicide, I wish they ALL didn't have to die.
It's too tragic.
But so true to human life and how sad it can be.
This was absolutely wonderful.
Beautiful writing.
:)

WOW. I know this is old, but... it's great! Your fic is quite belieavable, it'd even fit nicely in canon! The narration was outstanding, as though you were in her mind . The only thing I don't like about your fic are some spelling mistakes, but I dont know if you'll fix them now.

BTW, was it written before or after the How to Read guide(volume 13)? 'Cause there might be a bit of foreshadowing in that (powerful) last line ;D

I knew that the author of such a good fic as Coming Up Roses must have had something else in store for us :)

Take care!

~AnaPatri

Good job on this story. Misa is right on target.

Without Light there's only grays and sharp pain, and without L there's a soreness and an ache.- somehow this line stayed with me. I guess it's because it's a sentence that perfectly described her in this predicament.

19 disgustings xD LOVE THIS! 3

"digsusting, disgusting, disgusting!" xD

~~~Kimmi

Incredible. You captured Misa perfectly. The way she narrated, yet didn't quite narrate, was haunting. And the way the story played down to the last two lines blew me away. Excellent work.

Is the 'S' key broken on your keyboard, or did you purposely keep mis-spelling 'Disgusting'? :\

This story is brilliantly written, a great piece from Misa's perspective.

I especially loved the end line: "Misa-Misa thinks she's going to jump." It made me cry. So bittersweet.

This fanfic has re-ignited my DEATH NOTE OBSESSION :D

It's really great-simple and yet it conveys so much emotion.

The last line ("Misa-Misa thinks she's going to jump") was just brilliant.

ahahahaha! This is very hilarous, reading Misamisa's view on the "disgusting disgusting disgusting" L. xD

Wow, to of think Misa and Ryuzaki, being polar opposites, as a couple? That is something really strange, yet not entirely disagreeable. There are some scenes which bring my friends and I to this. Which is why we roleplay them as a couple. xD

I like it! :D haha, the paert where she was like 'disgusting, digusting, disgusting', that was funny. Also, I hope you update playboy soon! I love that story!