I love a good Yar fic - this just gives me ideas to actually go back and start writing again. It also makes me rethink my own little (unfinished) Yar fic concerning that hell-hole of a colony. And considering I bloody hated that Legacy episode and much prefer book #5 Survivors of the Next Gen Series so I tend to ignore the stupid episodes all together... which comes in handy when I'm off making alternate universe fics. Keep up the mayhem.

Very good story, though that was a very evil cliffhanger. I like the Picard/Tasha relationship a lot. Are you going to update this story sometime? I would like to read what happens next.

I enjoy Tasha stories, and I am particularily enjoying this one as it fills out her character from the brief glimpses we saw on TV. It's well written and I'm enjoying the story, so write more!

Nice! An update! I too wonder if it was a trap. Awaiting the next chapter. :)

Please update soon, cant wait to read the rest. Promise?

saint lucy

Oh my. Dear Kaliya22, You have done it again! I've always wanted to read a story that has Tasha going back to her home planet. This is wonderful! Are you going to include Tasha's sister Ishara? She is bad bad bad, but it could make for some good drama. :) I love the friendship with Riker and that Picard is like a father figure to Tasha. That is so sweet when Tasha said she wished that Picard was her father. Now Tasha can go back down to that planet and kick those goons butts and get those hostages back. YAY. Write more please. Pretty please?