| Reviews for It Was So Obvious |
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  Buller1991dk chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 there is only one word that fit this story and that is perfect beautiful I am truly for once at last for women I quite enjoyed reading what you made you and I would have allowed to see when this could potentially go I think what you're made here has a lot of potential and I think now I know so that you have what it takes to nurture this potential to even bigger greatness I wish you the best of luck and the best of health and my fortune smiles upon you |
 Itsc chapter 1 . 10/30/2017 Damn, this was cute. Weird to admit it, but I kinda wish this was the official plotline of Ben10... |
| csgt chapter 1 . 3/17/2017 I loved this story, especially the line about Ben and Gwen living in a world of their own! The gradual build-up towards the romance was fantastic. And I agree that Max would not be against their relationship, because Max himself dated an alien (Xylene), something that, in a realistic society, would also be looked down on. |
| jasongd chapter 1 . 11/24/2016 SOOB SOOB This was so sweet SOOB Good work i like this story |
| bnm1 chapter 1 . 11/16/2016 Cool story its refreshing to see bwen in maxs pov but its kinda hard to still think of them as 10yr olds when reading these kind of fics i didnt think kids like them would feel that way for their family/relative ..i read this like they were 13 yrs old. its really good lol but is the love theyre feeling platonic or romantic? Im having a hard time differentiating the two. rhetorical question there btw sorry and thanks for the story :) |
| AlenDarkStar chapter 1 . 9/5/2015 Cute. I enjoyed read Maxs point of view... |
| doc boy chapter 1 . 4/9/2014 It was cute and touching I liked it. Especially the ending when they hug and he realizes they're in love. I think it would be nice if you write a sequel to this but not a POV story |
| bookaholic2000 chapter 1 . 6/25/2013 Loved it! It was rather refreshing to read a Bwen fic in Max's point of view... |
| anon chapter 1 . 4/13/2013 LOVE IT! i love everything little bit of this story, i love the structure of it, the theme, the pacing, and the creative filler. this sort of mature writing definitely deserves honorable mention. please write more like this. |
| LoveGlutton chapter 1 . 3/24/2013 Nice story! |
| Exoticanimal10 chapter 1 . 1/12/2013 For the love of god. Is beautiful. This story, really read my thoughts! my thoughts on each of these episodes. The episode iwhen they were dancing. My God. they danced as closer and closer, the expreciones, their beautiful faces and how they act. |
| syrenia123destiny chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 omg. I loved it soo much. The greatest benxgwen fic ever! |
| AtheistMetal chapter 1 . 5/17/2012 This story perfectly sums up what I think of Bwen. |
| Victoriancuddler chapter 1 . 10/23/2011 Thar was amazing! Just loved it! You write pretty dammn well! I add this one to fav's and I'm gonna check out your other fics rigth away! |
| BlindMaster chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 is, the movie is good - but there are things I can not understand yet, why not write a FIC of the new series?. |
