I can't go on reading this as it's a really childish. Perhaps it was written by a child and it's meant for children to read and relate?

So Bella is a pig? On her wedding day she eats breakfast then Alice and Rosalie wash her hair in a big sink, style it, get her dressed yet Bella doesn't bother to shower on her wedding day? Euk lol.
I hope she showers before getting laid, if not then poor Edward!

He might not hear her thoughts and let's assume she could stay completely still and quiet in the bathtub but... what about her heartbeat (especially with E being so in tune with it) and vampires seeing clearly in the dark? :)
There's a lot of privacy in that vampire house compared to the canon.
E seems to relay more on what they say than what they think. I guess it is difficult to write around their gifts :)

I enjoyed this; a slightly different interpretation!

bella needs to grow up and let her childish parents go. if they are so against her marriage to edward they don't care much about her happiness. especially after all she's done for both of them. i mean she's been living with charlie for what, two years? what has he done besides allow her to live there, and cook and clean for him? did he give her an allowance? buy her a decent car? no! he bought her a beat up old truck to make his friend happy and give him more money for beer. and that's another thing. if charlie was so happy with bella coming to live with him, why did he still drink all the time? nothing ever happened in forks until the nomads showed up! and renee, don't get me started on her. what a bitch! it's all right for her to run and discard her marriage because she was bored, but she won't allow bella to make a life for herself? what is wrong with her? did she even come to bella's graduation or did phil take priority?

charlie has spent way to much time on the rez listening to billy's hatred and jacob's whining. no wonder renee left him!

edward's such a worry wart, i probably would have hit him!

Nevermind. It was just explained. Lol

I haven't read this story in a while so I am a little confused. How is Edward's dad still alive? I know his mom died of the (Spanish) flu, but I don't recall anything about his dad and had just assumed they were all dead. I guess he was born in 1904. Lol

*wipes tear* So proud of Bella. Already prankish Edward even before being married and a vampire!

YOU CAN BET I WILL BE READING THEM

OK WHY DOES BELLA NOT NEED BLOOD LIKE THE REST OF THEM AND WHAT IS HAPPENING TO HER ANYWAY

OK NOW I AM VERY CURIOUS AS TO WHAT IS GOING ON SO LETS GO SEE WHAT SHE HAS TO SAY

THAT WAS WEIRD WHAT CAUSED IT AND IS SOMETHING WRONG WITH BELLA

OK I HAVE A QUESTION I THOUGHTALL THEY HAD TO DO WAS LICK THE WOUND AND THE BLEEDING WOULD STOP NOY HAVE TO BANDAGE IT