Reviews for Memories of a Rival
LastOneOut chapter 3 . 1/8/2010
*chants* epilogue! epilogue!

lol great story!
famksantiago chapter 3 . 11/28/2007
OMG. Awesome I always loved JamiexJIll fics. And I started playing MM again trying to marry Blue, but... Jamie always has my heart... lol. God, I love this story.
8-Falling-Petals chapter 3 . 11/26/2007
Aw that's so sweet! I think you should write an epilogue.
Momo-chan12 chapter 3 . 11/26/2007
Squee! That was adoreable lol I have to agree with Dan and Joe, I can't deny it XD! I loved that so much, the ending was excellent and I had lots of fun reading it too, your a really skilled writer! You made JamiexJill one of my fav pairings now, so cute_ Yes, you must write an epilogue, Id love to read that! I want to know what happens to Jill and Jamie afterwards, that would be fun to read. Awesome work on this, I loved it!
BrokenTypewriter chapter 3 . 11/25/2007
For my first story to read in this website, you have an excellent and romantic one. I always liked the Harvest Moon Series (even if I never played most or all games). I also liked the way you write, it's very organized in a way. I also don't see any flaws which is really nice, so keep up the good work!
Prologue chapter 3 . 11/25/2007
This was adorable! And please do write an epilogue! I'll be looking forward to it.
Rapid-Starr chapter 3 . 11/25/2007
That was a really nice story! I liked how you ended it, that's about what I'd expect from Jamie, stubborn to the end! Overall I really enjoyed your story and I think that you should definatly do an epilogue. I wanna know how their lives turned out after they got married! Nice job!
Momo-chan12 chapter 2 . 11/25/2007
Naww, that was so sweet! I loved that moment between Jill and Jamie, I thought it was cute XD I love how you characterized Jill and Jamie and how you show their interactions, it seems very natural and realistic. AHH, how could you leave us with a cliffhanger? (holds on to cliff) Its torture T_T I wonder what happened in the incident. I hope you can update soon, this is an awesome story and I have to read more soon! Cya soon!
Momo-chan12 chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Nyaa, this was so kawaii! I absolutely loved it! #_# I think Jamie is an awesome character and I adore the JillxJamie pairing, its too cute XD! This was an amazing start, I loved your descriptions and how you started the story, it was very well-written. I wonder how Jill will answer his question, naa! I can't wait to see what you do with this, I'm sure it will be great I hope to read more of this soon~
baissemiel chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
What a cute story! Your overall description is nice and thorough, and I like the way you write Jamie's interactions with Jill.
DisneyDreamer07 chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
Aww! That's so sweet! Who knew Jamie could be such a softie? I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the great job! You've got quite a way with words.
ManitaMuerte chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
Yay! It is fixed! Can't wait for the next chapter!

CHA!
8-Falling-Petals chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
Aw that's so cute! Awsome! Can't wait for you to up date again!
Kuruk chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
I absolutely love Jamie! Thanks for writing a fic about him! He really is one of the most underappreciated and ill-conceived characters in Harvest Moon!

I love this and am waiting dutifully for your update!

~Kuruk
Jean Cooper chapter 2 . 11/24/2007
gah! you must update soon! Or I will protest outside of your house with little picket signs saying you're a puppy kicker! XD

Good job on the memories...now I wanna know what happened? :( please update soon
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