Dude, I love this!

I like how you write this story! I haven't read any of your other stuff so I can't compare... Sorry 'bout that.

I wish I'd seen those cosplay images though! XD

Gaah, I thought they would take the pictures a little earlier ;) Nice idea, Matt's so seductive here! :D

For sheer kinkiness and active imagination from the authoress, I am putting this on my favorites. (Even though there are some glaring errors - I am totally gonna ignore that.)

Another s/e/x? XD

This is so funny, lolol

lulz. awesome ]]

BWAHAHA XDXD so. fucking. EPIC! XDXDXD i nearly chewed off my hand, trying not have a roflmao.. my parents is sleeping.. ouch, my hand XD you have so much talent.. this should be a BOOK! Oo

That was really good! I started to laugh at the "give Near the finger" bit. As usual, it was well written and an enjoyable story. :)

i liked it! sweet simple to the point _

although i much prefere mello uke but this was still fun

YES! YOU GO TO THAT OTHER PHOTO BOOTH! AGAINAGAINAGAIN! *cheers like little kid on roller coaster* XDD Wow, that was... amusing. And wonderful. I certainly enjoyed it.

lol cute "Hey Mello. I see another photo booth" That was a really good story!

LOL that was funny :)

haha i really enjoyed reading this fic. It was very fun and interesting. Great job!

Oh wow! XD I wish I could write something like that! That's just awesome!

Keep up the good work!

I can almost see this actually happening between those two.

Loved it!