:-)

Maybe I missed an authors note somewhere but I was wondering why you created a professor instead of using Slughorn as potions professor?

Besides that question, I look forward to the next chapter.

You really have written a very interesting and cool chapter. Thank you for sharing it today. Have a good weekend. Keep safe. Keep smiling. :-) Can we have more please.

Very well written. I do wonder at the real reason why that Professor was so obviously anxious get into Grangers method of digging her nails into Grangers arm at the same time also verifies my suspicion that there is more.

Looking forward to reading more

Um... that chapter was a little confusing at first but you got it cleared up, thank you for the 'one of us' explanation. This is still going well, looks like Sirius might just be getting a little crush... or not, depends on how you look at it right? Anyways good job once again, keep going!

great

great

You have written an interesting chapter. Keep smiling. :-)

Update again soon..please?

This is really interesting. I love the whole phoenix tattoo that means you joined the Order, and the book idea seems very original. But couldn't you have kicked Lucius just a bit harder?

Great job, though.

Shadows

This chapter was enjoyable today. Keep smiling. :-)

Oh i love it!

Wow! This is so interesting so far! I cant wait to continue!

love it

interesting story looking forward to the next update

Please get a beta to proof read this. There are many misspelled words and grammatical errors. For example, it is "really" not "rely".