BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN STORY, BUT PAINFULL. GREAT TENSION. VERY VISUAL AND GRAPHIC. I DIDNT LIKE SARA DYING . TOO MUCH... THANKS FOR WRITING GSR STORIES.

WHY DID YOU KILL SARA ITS NOT ALLOWED

SUCH TENSION , HAT A VISUAL PICTURE YOUVE CREATED...BUT...SARA ...HOW IS GRISSOM GOING TO SAVE HER WHEN HE CANT SAVE HIM SELF.

WHAT A GREAT STORY, ALTHOUGH I HATE THE IDEAR OF SARA OR GRISSOM BEING HURT IN ANY AY. I LOVE THE TEAM TOO...BUT WHAT A GREAT STORY LINE...LOOKING FORWARD TO READING THE NEXT CHAPTERS...SUCH GREAT TENSION.

Your right I don't like since since finishing this story haha! well written thank you xx (Sillt hate that u killed Sara)

Omg that was soo good when sara died i didnt expect it wow

You made me cry... Great story anyway! You made the ending wright also, Congrats!

OMG! i seriously almost cried! that was so intense the whole time! so good! i hope you write more stories like that! AMAZING! D

good end, tis very sweet, and Sara Beth just sounds so aborable. some os Saras' spirit must live in her:)

I loved the story to the very end. It was sad that Sara had died, but they way you wrote it, it was surely memorable. You did a great job! Thanks!

Holy sh*t...

I'm crying... That's so sad... I really don't like it when Sara is died...

No more words from me.. I'm so sad...

Greg's reply brought tears to my eyes too. Congratulations, this was a great story. You should be proud of it - my first CSI story ever read. Thank you for showing me the light.

thats so sad.

post more soon

NO SARA CAN NOT BE DEAD! how dare you! you killed Sara, good chap though

very very good!

update soon!

:) amazing talent.