Love it. Love Remi

SO charming!

This is just so perfect! The expressions are really lively, but the best part is how easy it is to see all of this happening, particularly Remy on the light switch.

Do I detect a hint of Pixar parallelism in the "life is a well-oiled clock" line?

Truly delightful, and I hope Colette got closure with Linguini's "tiny... little..."

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Earmuffs! LOL! Is there any more? So funny...

I love this. I first read it on Livejournal, but I'm not a member so I couldn't post anything. I love how you've written Colette. She just has to take charge some times. Linguini is such a wimp, and the stuttering is a clear way of saying he is nervous about sex. Keep on writing.

Ha...that was really cute. Interesting idea for how their lives would be after the movie, I like it. Keep up the good work!

I LOVE Ratatouille! I'm looking forward to more fanfics of Ratatouille. Rock on!

Haha! I liked this! Quite a humorous little one-shot.

It was funny the way you wrote Remy's "Linguini's-on-a-date boredom." Also, the imagery in Remy as the stereotypical parent-waiting-for-teenager-to-come-home. hah.

I really liked how you wrote Colette talking to Remy. Her little paragraph to him was very sassy and *her*. Her sarcasm in "Monsieur Casanova" is great, and that's a really clever nickname. Very in character, the way she wants something and she's gonna get it!... without being sleazy, of course. Because you can tell she's not the type to let just any man have her. And that came through in your writing, especially in "If you put the moves on me, monsieur, you'd better be ready to follow through on them."

Great!

And of course, Linguini babbling like an idiot, and Colette apologizing for him. So them, so perfect, like an old married couple. Only better. I love it.

Sorry if my sentences don't make sense, I'm very tired right now.

Anyway, great work!

Man, this story is funy! Great job!