Reviews for Pretend
Twillight Bunny chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
Wow. That was the BEST kind of slightly disturbing, if you know what I mean..hahaha I really felt for your narrator :)

Excellent job!
Sour Queen chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
That was...beautiful. Astondingly beautiful, well written and more than anything I could have pieced in words. You've brightened my day to have read this. Great job.