I love your Hiruma characterization.

Sure Hiruma-angst is nice, but sometimes you've just gotta remember that Hiruma is Devil. He's smart and cruel and effing complicated. Not some namby-pamby ass.

Your fic gave me that.

Any suggestions for fics like yours?

I'm super confused. The farthest I got from the hints in the story and the title, is that Hiruma is perhaps not entirely human, something like a snake spirit or something similar, who is capable of performing witchcraft and uses his talents among the different people he comes across. I don't understand some vignettes, like Sakuraba or Mamori or Juumonji, or the whole gist of things. That is part of the attraction to this two-shot, but if it's possible, could you explain it to me? ;;

But God, I love this to itty-bitty pieces, because it's so mystical and spellbinding, so unexpected yet so fitting. *_* I love your word choices and the flow of this piece, and how Hiruma is a little bit like a sympathetic predator. It's very unique and interesting all of his encounters with the other members are so unpredictable. You just never know what's going to happen.

Yes. Yes. Yes. That's all I have to say.

Wicked crazy fsking awesome. Like, chapter two was HOT.

I loved the first half - and the overall story - for its shear... creepiness.

not bad

wow, this is so incredibly interesting, i'm finding it poetic in a way

I loved the bit when Hiruma paused on Jumonji's scar, because it's crossed shaped perhaps? ohhoho

i'm really looking foreword to more!

This fic is... different. Undoubtedly good.

this was um interesting lol. i wonder why hiruma is doing all those things and they all kinda seem to relate back to musashi?

So endearingly disgusting, I can't stop reading it...

It was wonderful, so filled with symbolisms, though I didn't really get the last part with the cards. I love the analogy with Agon kinda reminds me of a Boa and a viper. Agon being the Boa, all brute force and strength and Hiruma the viper, fast and poisonous.