Wow, wonderful, awesome, just friggin sweetness! LOVED IT

Holy cow! I figured it was Donnie the whole way through! Nver see Mikey doing the dirty work! I liked it a lot!

Great job on the story I liked it alot, and no i never gussed it was Mikey.

Wow! I was totally convinced that was Leo the whole time, and then I was like, "OMG!" as soon as I saw "nunchaku." Like, literally, my jaw dropped. But in a way, I can totally see it. Yes, he sounded like Leo, but I've always been of the opinion that Mikey is the most like Leo (or would be, rather, if he was more serious and disciplined). Anyway, great job!

...I could've sworn it was Leo. :0

I really liked it, especially this darker side of Mikey, very well done! :3

Holy crap! (Please excuse my French). I did not see that one coming. Mikey on a killing spree? That has got to be a first for the history books. I liked how you made him so serious and detached from it for a lot of the story, like an out of body experience.

Excellent writing and excellent plot twist! You're right, Mikey wouldn't be all fun and games in a situation like this. Fantastic job!

wow... I honestly thought this was leo... Damn.. lol Awesoem work tho! I could see this happening after I thought about it. Great work!

WOAH! And there I was thinking it was Raph until the last second! Well, you sure have knack for writing! Man, that was totally awesome. Keep writing!

I really liked it. Good job.

I actually thought it was Donny and the 's' on the weapons was a typo! That was extremely well written.

Mikey? Definitely the last turtle on my mind. I honestly thought it would either be Leo or Raph. Not Don or Mikey. But in a way, I do like the thought that it was Mikey. You somewhat showed what his serious side would be like, if it ever came out. And of course, it would only if his brothers were in danger. Great work :)

Wow...

I was TOTALLY thinking Leo, because that's how he thinks.

But WOW, nice plot twist!

Wow, I wouldn't have thought of that to be Mikey. I was thinking either Leo or Raph, and towards the end I was starting to doubt telling myself "It's not Mikey" but when you revealed that it was I was completely shocked. I luv "super serious, deadly ninja" Mikey, I feel that when that side of Mikey is shown he makes Leo and Raph put together, topped with an angry Donnie seem not as scary. This story has just made me want to read "The Odyssey" even more. Great job.

I didn't guess mikey at all. The second line says

It runs in rivulets down my blade, slowly being cast off to form a new pool of its own.

The blade part threw me off, and I immediately thought Leo or Raph. But either way, it was very good!