| Reviews for Small Games |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/10 I was hunting for a kankuten fic all day, this was worth it. Loved it! |
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 5/7 I have literally never considered this couple before, but I can't tell you how in love with it I am after this! lol. Seriously, I am literally putting a few nods to this couple in my Naruto AU (the only couple in the thing, at least for now, 'cause it focuses on friendship and stuff instead, haha) because of this fic! lol. (You don't mind if I credit you and give a shoutout to this fic in the A/N, do you? Just checking before I do! If I don't hear from you, I'll do it and then take it out later if you'd rather!) Really, I don't think I've really ever seen them interact in canon (but there's a lot of canon, so I could be forgetting, too, haha), but their dynamic here is so amazing! I LOVE it! Even in the beginning when they're FINALLY talking after they really haven't, he's so sneaky and she's so fun and sassy at once, and then she has to leave, he's watching her, and I HAVE FEELS! And then when he asks again and she gets all defensive about Neji, and just...GAH, I LOVE their interactions SO much! Everything feels so organic and amazing! All of my feels! That last part with him whispering in her ear, I GOT CHILLS! I reread it, like, seven times! lol. (JUST KISS HER, YOU FOOL! lol.) And then things get even more intense from there 'cause they just get CLOSER! AHHH! He keeps repeating that phrase, and *I* want to know what it meannnns! And then we figure it out, WOO! The implications with the Weapons Master thing, too, WOW! FEELS! I still want to know more about that, I'm DYING! It's been bugging meee! lol. I LOVE how Kankuro was the only one who could get her to wake up in the heat of battle and kick ass the way she did! And then HE was the one who took care of her! AHHH! Tenten's struggle with Neji and telling him a lot of things in the hospital and AHHH! I FELT her heartbreak! /3 And then as we go with her and Kankuro getting even closer, ALL of my emotions! I LOVED reading it, and then that last one where Kankuro comes to find her, COMPLIMENTS everything about her (the 'she thinks she's scrawny, but she's got a body on her like you wouldn't believe' line had me DYING, like, DAMNNNN, boy, you SMOOTH AF! X'D LOVED it! Reread that part a few times, haha!), and then HE SAYS THE THING AGAIN! AHHHH! And then the steamy part comes, and I AM EVEN MORE IN LOVE! Normally that kind of thing isn't quite my thing, but MANNN, I reread it a few times! Hahaha! FEELS AF with this fic, seriously! I LOVEEE this so much! You're amazing! Thank you SO MUCH for writing this fic! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! I would literally love to put this fic in a picture on my wall, like, literally! lol. You're the best! Thanks for introducing me to one of my new fave Naruto couples! lol. 3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2019 This is definitely one of my favourites Kankuten fanfiction! Great job with EVERYTHING! |
Poodie chapter 1 . 12/5/2016 That quote is the best! I love it and this one shot! |
Softie chapter 1 . 4/1/2015 Haha, yes! They are a cute pairing, a mouse and a cat. You made it feel believable and I honestly gotta say, I liked their bickering more than being together :) keep the good work, ya? |
Natarumi chapter 1 . 8/20/2014 It was a really nice story, but did it HAVE TO end in a lemon scene? |
Pretenders chapter 1 . 2/16/2014 Love it. Please write more for Kankuro and Tenten when you have the chance! |
Clementive chapter 1 . 4/4/2013 First of all, let me tell you that I don't usually ship this couple but you have managed to have me hooked. This was well written and fun! :) |
sylversmith chapter 1 . 1/16/2013 All around fantastic. You did a wonderful job really building and developing the characters (all sticking to their foundation from the manga) and you built a wonderful balance between descriptors, story line, and romance/fluff. From a reader's perspective, your theme was beautifully woven throughout the story, and I can't wait to reread! |
cozieatbrains chapter 1 . 12/11/2012 At first., igot confused as to what exactly kankuro was referring about. But it became clear on the latter part. Anyway.. This is again a wonderful fic. Its very well written. Grammar , diction , pacing are all good. And the thing that i liked the most in this one and all other story of yours is that , they are very much in character. Even in the lemony part :)) really .as always, you did a great job. Please do more of this two. :) its official. You are my favorite kankuxten author! :) |
Armads the Doom Bringer chapter 1 . 11/29/2012 This is amazingly good. A tad long, but all the better for it. I usually force myself to find something to criticize, but I'm almost at a loss for what I can say. This is one of the best pieces of fiction I think I've ever read, not just on this site. It is a truly marvelous work, and only makes me want to read more. A fantastic job; you should be proud of this. |
CutieSOS chapter 1 . 5/8/2012 this was really good |
leiaah chapter 1 . 3/2/2012 that was awesome. i just love the build up of their relationship, and that ending. very, very, VERY good. |
Azhwi chapter 1 . 2/29/2012 Beautiful work with this pair. I'm a happy fan of them. Probably always will be. As a one shot it answered all that it needed to, and it was long and detailed enough that I was satisfied at the end... Why the heck does that sound like sex? I wonder :D Thank you so much for writing and sharing! |
GirlintheBlackTrench chapter 1 . 10/10/2011 For this story I need write only three syllables... A-maz-ing! |