Keep it up ; )

Your grammar is great. You wrote nice long chapters. You finished the story. I have to say that it got worse with every chapter I read. Voldemort, Lucius, Narcissa, and Snape were badly projected in your story, you could have done a little more research on their characters (personality and traits). Also, apparition is a great way to travel but it seems to me that you totally forgot about the existence of Portkeys. Why did Harry wanted to go after Snape, and why -in the name of Morgana- did Dumbledore let them [Draco and Harry] go ALONE? Durmstrang is widely known for teaching Dark Arts but that doesn't mean they can host Death Eaters and a Dark Lord without it going unnoticed by the authorities, after all Gellert Grindelwald was expelled from Durmstrang. I won't say more because honestly, it was a rather interesting plot but it made no sense.

Thank you so much for this story! I really enjoyed reading it. I have read this before and lost the story for a while before I found the story agin today! It is really going in one of my Favs. I can't wait for the new sequel! d(*v*)b

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It's rare for a story to get progressively worse as the plot thickens. But this story does just that. Something that starts off as slightly illogical gradually becomes downright absurd and preposterous. {{Why Dumbledore would let Harry embark on this senseless journey, why Lupin can apparate back to the castle before the boys can, why Hogwarts isn't the first place they apparate to as opposed to the hotel and Malfoy manor, why Voldemort doesn't kill Snape when he KNOWS that he is betraying him in Durmstrang, why Voldemort doesn't kill Harry when he's right under his nose, why the boys go on this long aimless journey get to Durmstrang and have absolutely nothing to ask Snape?}} All of these things have completely confounded me to the extent of failing to finish the story, fearing what other kookoo nonsense you will have written to unsuccessfully account for your characters aberrant behavior. If you wanted to write mindless smut, then write mindless smut. But don't fashion it under the pretense of being an actual story.

- O.

I would've really liked this story, the characterizations are great, grammar is sound, and narrative voice is confident and self assured while not being arrogant. So where does the story go wrong? The plot. It makes absolutely no sense. The boys have gone on an exceedingly dangerous and POINTLESS (I honestly can't stress this enough) adventure and no matter how many times I try to reason it, it simply doesn't make sense. Furthermore, the fact that you have centered your entire story around this nonsensical journey only makes it stick out more as completely inane and unbelievable. You insult your reader by thinking they will either not notice or overlook this sour thumb. It is very much noticed and unfortunate, considering the flawless characterizations of your plot though, is a no no.

Very good Harry, suddenly someone(your rival) rapes you and you starting to like it...? Are you nuts or something...?

Aaaarrr..sure a sweet little story and for it I give you: two silver stars.

Hope to see more one day soon.

The Crimson Mage.

This was a good fanfiction. I liked it! :)

Oops, i made an error on my last review on this story. My previous review was not meant for this story, sorry.(As this does not contain a LM/HP rape scene)

So on with the real review. I have to say that i absolutely loved this story! The lemons & mpreg were the icing on this delicious concept. Seriously i want a squeal please! You are an amazing author & deserve a hella lot more reviews. Drarry(only when Draco tops) is one of my favourate pairings & you wrote them beautifully. I know you finished this story a while ago but i am still hoping you would do a squeal. It is hard finding

Really loved reading this amazing fic of yours. Just love DMHP fics & this is one of the best fics i have read apart from the LMHP rape scene) eww!

Loved it! You should really write a sequel. This deserved more reviews.

Great story, in some ways the plot felt a bit forced, but the characters and their development more than made up for it. Great mixture of tension and fluffiness. Hope you do consider writing a sequel one day, as there didn't seem to be one so far.

So, I'm wondering, where's this sequel? I really hope you do write one. It needs one of Jamie growing up and Harry and Draco falling in love with each other. So, please do one soon.

Very cute! Though the stra gets timeline I've encountered in a story, goig from such a slow steady buildy up to everything happening pretty much overnight, still loved it and loved Draco and harrys strange relationship. And their adorable son

Thanks

This is one of my absolute favorite fanfictions ever. I have been waiting for over a year now for the sequel to come out. Please let me know when you are going to update. Can't wait!